
Thanks so much for translating this, I really love this Yuri! I'm bi but prefer yaoi smut because Yuri smut usually gives vibes of being written by a 50 y.o. guy with a loli fetish, but this one's different and so interesting! (And hot!)
Also, dude idk why you're insulting your work because the quality's great! Scans are clean and unwarped, and diagloue flows and makes sense. You're doing awesome thanks for translating this for us.

How exactly does it come across as what you've just said if you mind me asking? Do you mostly read Mira or Asagi Ryuu's works?
Not to sound reductive of the genre, but to me it was yaoi that felt more like it was written by people with a fetish for gay men instead of actual understanding of male homosexuality. I'm not even sure if there are any noteable male yaoi mangaka

Oh there are definitely a lot of yaois out there that have that vibe of only being "acceptable" because guy-on-guy is hot, but there's a lot more yaoi compared to Yuri so it's easier to find yaois that don't give that vibe.
I also feel like it's gotten better in the last couple of years compared when I first started reading yaoi (around 2010?).
And noo not just them, I have a hard time trying new yuris just because a lot of the ones I've come across are like that. Especially schoolgirl fantasies that are just fanservice but with no actual progress. I have a whole bunch I just follow now to get update notifications.

It makes me sad though that no one did anything to help Fuji beyond "oh did your drunk dad hit you again" :((
But I'm glad he has great friends and him and his boyfriend are so cute.

They didn't do anything because his dad wasn't violent towards him he was just a drunk. Everything that caused him harm was his unlucky aura or bad luck. Like things falling on him, the soccer ball hitting him etc. That's why he was so nonchalant about his injuries. It wasn't his dad doing him harm. He even says he was slightly caught by the bottle flying, so the bottle wasn't aimed him or would have hit him straight on. His dad probably threw it towards the trash or a corner and Fuji's unlucky ness put him slightly in the way. That's why the dad is written kind of comically if u noticed when he actually makes his appearance. His just a drunkard drowning in his wifes passing.
Touya so damn chill tho...
Also, did clumsy by Fergie popup in anyone elses head after the king said to call him Fergie ? Like I'm so glad that was at the end, would've totally ended any mood if he called him Fergie while cumming.