first of all, super cute story..anyway, the translation was HORRIBLE like i was confused half the time. also, the bottom looked like he was beat up after they had sex and it’s making me laugh LMAOOO ALSO WHY R HIS NIPPLES WEIRDLY HUGE???? it kept distracting me they look like fucking press ons. i also wish this was longer, not cuz it’s stupidly amazing, but because it felt suuupperrrrrrrrr rushed. the art is gorgeous tho
jaekyung was a decent kid, maybe a little rude, but as a teen he seemed fine...BITCH WTF HAPPENED TO HIM??????????? im mad as hell, I like his kid/teen era but his adult self fucking SUCKS.
I think he thinks he's jinxed because his dad died after he said he was going to win and if he did he would keel over and die. maybe, as time goes on and he tells someone lol imma win fuck you, someone close to him gets injured or dies and the one time someone didn't get injured or die was when he had sex with someone before hand. it would be so fucking stupid, but this whole story is fucking stupid so I wouldn't be surprised.
I relate so much to jjk's past, I hate how he turned out. I hate how the author is making him what he hated. jjk deserved a better written personality, this shit is making me sad.
I don't think that constitutes bad writing, it's interesting how he ended up being what he hated and how he can't escape his dads influence even though he said he would. Typically I would see the opposite in stories
honestly, I feel like he was a pretty decent kid?? like wtf made him change into what he is now..
mhmm like hes one of the most hated characters and that just makes it all the more interesting for me to find out what made him that way and how the author could possibly redeem such an asshole
and the award for the most confusing BL goes
tooooo…. LMAO i honestly have no fucking clue what’s going on & i like every character BUT arthur he’s so dreadful, vienna and x are my dear boys tho
bro the top is so fucking pathetic i’m pissing my pants ts is HILARIOUSSS