
The characters are so cute and I love their personalities and chemistry! As a someone who is black myself I really applaud the author for depicting black representation in bl. I think we often get male leads that are white/mixed with white but never any blk rep. I don't know much about the Maasai tribe so I hope all the references to the culture are respectful and accurate the only thing I think they should have portrayed more accurately is the skin tone. Since Luka is from the savannah his skin tone should be a lot darker from the sun exposure (its very evident in pictures of the tribe) and i think the author tried to give him locks in chapter one and gave up and just gave him straight hair for the rest of the series. But overall I really like the story im not intending to bash it! But this is my honest opinion/perspective!

You literally wrote my review for me XD! Completely agree with your points and yeah, I def noticed the difference in how the hair was drawn, sucks it changed but hopefully we'll get more peeps who draw em and eventually learn how to get the consistency. Aside from that, I loveddd this story and I really want a second volume!

I don't want neither of them hoes to win

Don't Engage with that Assertive Tigritude https://www.mangago.zone/home/people/3687008/home/
It is another cyberstalker impersonating the real Tigritidue.

I enjoyed it but I think the story couldve been fleshed out more? I'm still unsure why Kylot was using Rabby from the beginning? I get he wanted to fuck over his family but I still don't understand why and I still don't understand why he needed Rabby to be apart of that??
For yall saying (incest with the "alien Kylot thing" he's not their son he's an alien that needed Rabby's body heat to be born NOT his actual son ngl I wasn't pleased they left him in the story)

I agree that it definately could've been more flesh out, and I could see this story definately working out to be 60+ chapters with world building and character motives and whatnot, but I'm not sure Kylot was using Rabby since the very beginning. I think it's more that Kylot took a passing fancy to Rabby, since Rabby was extremely adamant about not leaving the dude alone, which was something that Kylot doesn't appear used to
Poor fucking Cirrus WHAT THE FUCK DID I JUST READ