It lacks the very backbone of storytelling. The story is all over the place, the setting was not structured very well to leave a lasting impression other than that tigers place; what a waste. The school, the fl, the tiger, the boy, the younger siblings, even their lines and especially the narrating structure are poorly designed. The illustrations will be wasted if this continued. The characters lacks personalities especially their motivations too. Some char is okay like the pink haired girl. Her scene and lines are good for their scene together, her actions are better conveyed aside from the main character...Rawr! The fact that the author added some younger siblings, fl should have a grounded personality with them, she was seen as what? Her hardworking was not given a large amount of time, theres so much potential there. Its too short.. The world-building is too fast! The tiger was introduced fast! Author shouldve narrate the very backbone of fl to make her much appealing and relatable...now, when reading shes like, JUST a character with no potential to grow...everything is gloomy, if you want your main character to stand out and be loved, give them some idealistic qualities. This Fl has nothing to offer. Im beginning to think that the author wants to end this fast. Still at chapter 13 but already at the peak of conflict. Too many ideas and elements running here..should introduce them slowly to have a lasting impression to readers...might drop this, im just here because of the cute tiger, kinda sad that the art is being wasted like this...kinda nonesense with the rescue scene..hmm, anyway, were just blinded by the cute tiger.
They finally reunited....imagine or feel how strong peoples connection get when together they experience war or calamity...the camaraderie, the communication and vulnerabilty with these people, really facinates me...i tend to get emotional with these reunions huhu
I need some explanation with all the fckng things all these beautiful assholes are doing...theyre acting jerks!!!! I fckng hate the way blonde treat our cutiepie when he dont get what he wants...cutiepies in dillema...cant blame him but he needs to start thinking deeper with their relationship and set boundaries...hes just being passive..
Dropped this for a long time..and, hmmm, i agree with the other commentor that the story is all over the place...still entertaining and i like the illustrations...will be back for the ending.
I hate loops. I hate the system here. I hate that he alwahs dies and suffers. Just fckng why!? So unfair. At this ratr, i want to kill the system and the one who controls it. At thi rate hell end up losing his mind. I dont like it :<. 0its dragging the story too!!!!!
At this point, I am fairly positive that the system is the real antagonist. For whatever reason, it wants ML#1 to suffer as much as possible, and that's why it keeps moving the bar on the difficulty level. And why it brought in the ex-BF (ML#2), when ML#1 was going to ignore trying to kill the emperor. The only question is WHY does it want him to suffer?
Let them pleasure themselves peacefullyyyyy killer just stay dead and dont comd yet
I give up..gonna drop this..
Everyone is not worth waiting for even the fl...
Shes dreaming too, dont like how shes too firm on that path but still contradicts herself...
Many characters personalities even though the story is just starting, i can already know that those shitheads wont grow..even the fl..the prince is, idk passive..still associating himself with those mindsets, pisses me off.
I have no words for the saint...
The pacing is okay. But the setting is questionable. It was not given a much screentime or further exploration..it lacks the background..anyway, gonna drop this.
Tbh, I'm here for Jill and the villagers of Roana