
If I could draw I'd make a story with less drama and way lesser sex scenes. I'd like to see genuine development, characters getting to know each other instead of always doing it everytime they are together. Love is more than sex but well it's a fiction and that too smut. Yuha is best boy and he genuinely cared for her his brother didn't even try and just jumped on his own assumption when evie was held hostage so I dont think that's a good quality even if he is handsome. And that dark skinned dude was actually one of my favourite till he became obsessive he probably raped Evie as a way of revenge for Yuna who was raped by Evies dad. Yuna is best girl for me and she did not deserve any of the suffering she went through. I hope that red head woman and those two men were send to jail and punished. I also hate evie's father I swear i felt like throwing up when yuna had to settle with him but he also died I guess karma? Idk. Coming to Evie i liked her at first but no girl just because you're heartbroken doesnt mean you go hopping on dicks, she literally just used that dark skinned guy and threw him away when things went well with the mister. Yes, ofc she found out he was her step mother second love. But she also knew that the mister was the first love. I'm just saying that whether she knew the fact or not it was clear she was ready to throw him away anytime if things went well with mister. So yeah minus points. When she ended up with Yuha I was happy bc she can start and love again especially this time she didn't have the mister on her mind but geez how can feelings just change so fast it was pretty fucked up. It's not a bad thing tho you go girl plus yes yes it's just fiction at the end of the day. Take care guys!!!
Thank you so much for the update!!!! Please take care of your health and stay safe <3