First, I really need to say it, I'm not okay with this art style. Their heads have the proportions of kids' and their faces look waaaay too young, which made the whole thing unpleasant to watch.
Also once again too many useless sex scenes, and the art style made them gross. They're not just pointless but they even ruin the immersion.
Nothing important happen in these sex scenes, and the censorship is just like some random stranger barging in your house screaming "HEEEEEEY! YOU RE READING A BOOOOOOK!!!"
Okay thank you I know this but did it have to have huge eraser holes in the middle of the drawing for scenes that sometimes are several chapters long? If I'm not supposed to watch this, why draw it at all?
The characters are quite boring (not the sister, I love the sister and she didn't have enough screentime srsly) and that flashback scene at the end to imply the so cliche and random ass reunion that only one of the protagonist remember and saved him back then was so out of character...
Also the whole story was bad because ba da actually didn't have any reason to be that way, he doesn't seem to be autistic, grew up in a normal environment with a very basic and normal entourage,
So him being so out of it regarding feelings related to love just came out of nowhere, and makes it hard to take him seriously, he just looks annoying like wtf is wrong with you? Did you forget your brain in the author's drawer?
Some scenes were funny but it was not a good story.
I can't say that everything suited my tastes here but the grandfather x Taesun relationship was so sweet, so endearing, and the grandfather's death was so poetic it almost (?) made it harder to accept, I literally cried my eyes out... And cried again when he reappeared at the end.
Thanks to this I could make peace with the interspecies sex and the man POOPING EGGS ffs. Well that's why I kept reading, I was really curious about how the birth was going to be and... Mh. I already said this many times but thanks God yaoi men don't shit, it never applied more than now.
I'm still curious about the snake species, it seemed to be a constrictor but constrictors are viviparous, the vertical pupils and eggs would indicate something like a (giant) viper but these are venomous, and nothing in the story implied it... Am I thinking too much?
Anyway I loved this story, it was very sweet.
And there was just... 35 chapters of sex lol.
This is just toxic empty rape porn with some kind of something floating in the background but never explained or developed.
Even though the hypnosis part was utter bullshit, I still forced my suspension of disbelief to accept it, to see where it was going.
...
In the butt. This is where it's going.
Nowhere else.
Not a single chapter sex free out of 35 chapters.
NOT. A. SINGLE. ONE.
Even the very first chapter HAD to end with a hairless dick just in case us brainless perverts wouldn't keep going.
I feel insulted.
The art was ok, and truly wasted on this shit.
This was bad?!
Like really, REALLY ! BAD !
It started pretty good and seemed to have something to say about bullying, homophobia and also that dumb thing kids do, you know... Meddling in adults' business and involving innocent kids
"Uwahhh your dad is a shit he did that to my dad so you re a shit too" I really wanna slap all of them brainless midgets
.... But no.
These things just happened but there was no morales, no lessons, no conclusions,
let's do porn instead!!! ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
And everything just jumps from one thing to another without any purpose and they re adult so they fuck, do a thing then fuck then the end, go somewhere then fuck then the end, speak about something then fuck then the end, meet someone then fuck then the end, have a flashback then fuck then the end... It just look like a lame joke at this point then it's the end of the story and nothing really happened and nothing was really resolved but they sure fucked a lot.
Actually, everything happened for nothing.
Huh, Soowha's glasses that literally triggered the whole story by including him in the group but never showed up again?
At the end even the artist gave up and literally forgot to draw stuff like mehh, doesn't matter they gonna fuck soon anyways.
I didn't expect it to be THAT bad.
Honestly took down 1* only because of this. Where da heck did granny go??? There was no more real drama so it was okay to just erase her from their daily lives??? Wtf!
It was a good story though, I may be biased but I kinda can relate with the protagonist s situation.
Oh but nobody died in my case I've just been forsaken, erased from everyone's life and memories. I was just a happening, and no one ever loved nor hated me enough to remember that I was ever part of their lives/family. My memories are mine only and there's nobody I share them with because they were only important to me.
Not gonna lie, yeonwoo often irked me with his reactions... Then I realized he's just a kid and his reactions were pretty legit for a 20 yo child, I've come to peace with this reality only because I'm way older than him.
And at least my dogs loved me unconditionally their whole lives, they re the only memory I cherish now and will until my last breath.
Oh but if I become a ghost the other memories will take over and get ready for some real traumatic shit, you sorry excuses of humans (╬￣皿￣)凸
ANYWAY!
Maybe the author relied a bit too much on the memory loss trope, sticking it to every important character (yeonwoo's felt forced) but it kinda worked because of the suicide attempt method, I still think it was pretty clumsy and unnecessarily important though.
I guess the appreciation of this story will greatly vary depending the ages and situations of the readers... But I liked it.
Also where do these boys get all that money from? Were seongwoon's parents rich or something?
My dog did this exact same thing... With the drains and sewers in the street lol... All his life. He d froze in front of it and stare for a few seconds then bunny hop to avoid any of his paws making contact, then proudly waltz with his head and tail high until the next one (literally 5 meters away).
Strolls were a pain in the ass lol.
Also, absolutely EVERYTHING in here is hilarious.
So please you saints carrying and spreading around the holy political truth just shut up now.
There is no pedophilia in here.
Just a very young kid crushing on an adult and doing shit a very young kid idolising an adult would do.
And that very same adult making lame jokes like any adult would make lame jokes about a very young kid worshipping them.
There is no homophobia in here.
Just an old alcoholic rough man interacting with a younger gay man that he knows very well, talking crudely like alcoholic rough around the edges old men talk to their friends.
There is no transphobia in here.
The man himself doesn't delude himself and knows and accept that he's a man even though he takes pleasure talking about himself as a young maiden. I'm the fucking exact same.
I'd sell my soul and all of yours to Belzébuth to be reborn as a man, I talk about myself independently of my gender and FFS I'm french, in french even inanimate objects have a gender!!! but I'm neither trans nor non binary or whatever the fck you delusional kids want to call it because I just don't give a flying fuck. I'm a woman because my sexual chromosomes are XX and even though I'm very unhappy with my genetic, I have no rights nor interest in imposing other people my delusions so you seriously gotta stop with this bullshit.
Transpeople would live better lives if your fucked up ideology didn't bring them to think that other people have to comply with any weird shit their brains make up.
The whole book is hilarious and your holy bullcrap has no place in here, real life is not twitter.
But volume 1 was quite very uncomfortable.
It's actually really accurate concerning the age kids discover sexuality but it's not something I wish to see.
Volume 2 is more interesting but something's missing... I'm not talking about their genitals,
they're surprisingly here(￣∇￣")
But yea, I now wonder if the absence of the families ' reaction is a 3rd volume trigger or just an open ending.
What? The end? THIS is the end??? Like the real end? No way???
Yeonjun will just be a random happening and occasional drama trigger and you re not gonna explain a single thing? Noooo waaaay. I refuse to believe this.
It will be minus 3 * until the story is actually completed, I have way too many questions that can't be buried under a light little happy ending romance here.
Also Yujun is an absolute treasure ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~
Oh I'd also would appreciate an explanation as to why Dajun has the eyes of a cat, it weirded me out in every chapters.
But ended up with 5.
All of this because my immersion cod never be complete, as the story seemed to be written... Like a story and the characters seemed written like the protagonists of a book.
What made it this way is the drag. Okay, most of the characters knew ha kyung was a man, but the two mains seemed to genuinely believe he was a woman, even though all that was shown was him putting on a wig.
Took 70 chapters out of 79 to mention he disguised his voice... His adam apple was also pretty obvious, and his whole build wasn't especially feminine, not to mention we're talking about a young man who supposedly completed his mandatory military service, but the whole voice thing was what prevented my full immersion for so long.
Since the author finally noticed and fixed that (or was it on purpose? I don't know how other people read stuff) it totally reached the 5 stars.
There were surprisingly no antagonists in this story, only prejudices and bad decisions, and everybody had their redemption arc... Well redemption PANELS lol so it was all pretty sweet.
Kind of got emotional at the end when the mother's death appeared and grandfather video, such sweet, sweet parents...
Also enjoyed the women not being troublemaker bitches, both yoonsung's mother and sil, my only regret may be the bar owner hyung who was brutally kicked out of the story, why?
Anyway, it was good. It was interesting and the art was good since the beginning (especially the greenery) yet still managed to improve.
That one editor that shall not be named really should invest in a proof reader or quality checker, the typos are still legion here.
Also kudos for not just shoving useless sex scenes at random moment to retain THAT part of the audience.
But what's way funnier is the sex scenes, or more precisely the sex scenes censorship.
I can't believe somebody, somewhere, decided that it was a good idea to... Censor the censorship xD
If you're that much against sex just remove it entirely, but the extra censorship here blew my mind, I've never seen someone eraser-censoring the black-bars-censorship along with the genitals like "alright, now I shall annihilate any single trace of sex in here, which includes the previous censorship... But I ll leave the butts. It s okay, butts are cute." x'D such a dedication x')
Is this finished?
Nobody's gonna explain the gift and love letter in his locker?
Why was it even in the story?
And the bff rollercoaster love life, same, it just ends in the middle of the fight with his boyfriend because he's not the protagonist so no one cares?
Why is it in the story then?
And the woman lookalike, it's just... There... For nothing?
Whyyyyyy is it in the booooooook theeeen?
And the sister's misunderstanding about the MC's sex, did that also fall in a hole of the plot?
WHY WAS IT IN HERE THEN!
Seriously did Dory write this story?
It's bad, it's empty af and everything is unfinished.
Also why do they look and act like they're 12... And where TF are all these kids parents ffs !?!
There's nothing for me in here.
I'm sure there's an audience for this, but it's not me.
You pedo shit enjoy your crushed weapon, I honestly just wished they made him transition and throw him in a prison for men so that he can enjoy what he did to kids for the rest of his hopefully long life, lucky bitch still get to enjoy his smashed nuts tsk.
The book was hilarious though the topic was fucking heavy, didn't start it expecting this, but I got some doubts bubbling quite early in the story.
I love that the characters are not either saints or walking shits (beside class rep bro) (and class rep) (and their bitch of a mother) (seriously they can just all go to hell and start polishing my throne, I'll take great care of their case when I get there),
their flaws make them more acceptable and my suspension of disbelief wasn't savagely ripped to shred. I absolutely worship this author.
The magic was okay though never explained (well try to explain this kind of fantasy duh) and I totally accepted the lottery shaman granny's display, the real plot didn't even leave any room for me to be stuck on the out of nowhere supernatural... These colossal pieces of shit is2g...
ANYWAY!! I LOVE THE CONSEQUENCES!
REDEMPTION ARC ARE NEVER AN OPTION FOR RAPISTS, PEDOPHILES, MURDERERS AND SHIT!
Go rot where you belong you giant radioactive humanoid diarrhea.
Oh and the romance part ... It's cute but I don't even care at this point the story was just too good.
The translation of 3rd volume is awful, it's so bad that I can barely recognize the characters, the grammar is insulting and half of.the dialogues don't make sense... Shouldn't have checked the updates, I used to like this serie but this froze my interest.
What the hell is that rating????
Ah, yea, of course ... The saints who read the 2 first chapters and are so better than everything, huh?
Seriously this is a masterpiece, it's so fucking adorable, sweet and hilarious it makes me physically sick lol
....or maybe it s because I started it because I wanted something light to fall asleep and Majestically failed xD I laughed so much my voice is hoarse like a man's and my jaw feels stiff af
Ilove the characters and I fucking love their flaws and how they handle them, and I especially love that asshole for being dumb enough not to recognize his own feelings for 20 whole chapters, and I love more than anything how he confessed and reflected on his beliefs this is the sweetest and absolute loveliest conclusion he could have come up with.
Says the 40 yo bitch who put on 15 kilos these last 3 years for absolutely no reason and can't move freely that brand new fat ass of hers. Being fat is so hard (my age probably doesn't help) I don't know how to manoeuver this new body, and never felt that unhealthy in my life, my lungs literally drown in my fatness wtf
Nobody cares? Of course lol, still writing it anyway. I don't care that people don't care which kinda makes us closer.
The story was quite interesting before it suddenly became a magical basic Shojo trope with its basic Shojo héroïne and her basic Shojo trama and basic Shojo actions/réactions.
Feels like a waste.
I had more to say before the sudden time rewind happened, I really liked Taewha savage and stupid purity, not your basic powerful arrogant perfect top who falls in love because of the magical power of the protagonist's mystical magnetism but the time travel had to show him as that random ass obsessive brutal top that you see in 98% of bl manwhas, which ruined his image.
Doesn't FEEL like a waste, it WAS one.
And please don't piss inside people wtf