This was awful.
Everything.
The story, the characters, the topic, the rythm, the context, the art, everything.
The story was dragging on for so long, it could have been more bearable if it was 30/40 chapters shorter.the depression of the protagonist was portrayed in the worst possible way and just disappeared when it was done with its purpose of occupying 25 chapters.
The only character i felt something for was that poor puppy that was just erased from the end of the story. Yejun the idols also disappeared just like that, woithout any consequences to his actions.All the others were just so self centered that it felt like they all belonged to their own stories and their interactions felt unnatural.
The topic was treated to lightly and clumsily and drowned under all the other subtopics so it's hard to even pick one as the main.
The rythm is inconsistent and doesn't even make sense, I'm still wondering what the fck was that random flash forward of the junkie being attacked, it may even just be an upload mistake for all iknow since it just came out of nowhere, went nowhere and meant nothing.
The sex scenes are drawn horribly, they check all the codes of fighting scenes wtf. They were not intense, they were violent. and difficult to watch/read.
The whole thing seems to try to appear like something "mature" lol, for adults to enjoy, but it was not. Violent sex, toxic relationship, free violence and drugs are not "adults" interests.
They're adolescents interests.
So in this regard, the book is very inappropriate for the audience it's aimed at.
It was boring, long and hard to read.
And finally i dont know what PR stands for but if it is "paying reader" just know that it doesn't allow you to interrupt the story to spit random shits eapecially when you ended up stealing the story to share it illegally ffs.
If you have comments, share it here, where others who ARE actually interested in your opinion can interact with you and not in the middle of the upload between two panels just to interrupt everybody when they're just trying to get out of this crap.
What happened?
The 20 last chapters are so short , the end so rushed and doesnt make sense at all? What's with all the sheme between will's father and the sister's (whose name is still unknown) ex??? It looked like the beginning of a new something but suddenly, end?
I think I don't understand
Couldn't keep reading lawyers unable to make a single proper sentence. Please hit me up if a clean translation ever comes out, i liked the art and i think i could enjoy the story
All those people hating this besides into the comments of people who liked it
It's hilarious though
Weird but hilarious.
I love weird shits and i love it even more when it's not the same overused serious cliches that you'd find literally everywhere.
The only thing that i hate is that i randomly started reading some unfinished book again.
But before i resume, can you please tell me how you'd pronounce that name "Harace"?
It wasnt even ol'plain cthulhu, CTHULHU MARADONA!
I'm losing my mind a little more every week, that's why i avoid unfinished books ><
SUCKS.
Wtf are those proportions???
Kids faces drawn on needle heads on top of approximative adult male bodies that don't really have muscles, bones or any human shapes, some kind of .. jelly bodies??
And the story so far didn't even make up for the art.
I kept reading expecting some improvement in the art or some kind of plot taking place but at ch28, there was still nothing... So I dropped it.
Go and make your own opinion about this, it was absolutely not my thing though.
You managed to poop a baby whose head is three times the one of an adult, you can handle the fisting.
Okay, seriously now.
I almost dropped this savagery, i only stayed because the mc managed to escape at the exact right time. Gotta say the art greatly improved, pretty much in sync with that asshole main lead...and I guess the baby wasn't expected to appear, which would have been for the best.
It was cliche af, not very interesting, the beginning is badly drawn and the baby ugly as hell.the ending was exactly what you'd expect from this trope and it sucks. There WAS a serious character development but at se point, authors will have to face their fear of hysterical decerebrate fangirls and start writing some coherent stories, those kind of "happy endings" are nothing but overused clichés now.
it's time to up your game guys, take some risks and give us some real shit
I dropped it at ch 186. Honestly i liked the story, since for once in this genre the author actually explained the whole universe creation, causes and consequences. The time travel thing thew me off, I don't like time travel because it just... Well it doesn't work, it never works no matter the genre of story it's always bullshit and it didn't make exception here. Deus ex machina should be forbidden, especially when it simply erases the emotional stakes in a story.
In the end nobody died and all is well that ends well equals to thank you, fuck you for me.
It's just me though but that's how i feel about this.
But well, yea. Ch 186. Random ass love story that popped out of nowhere because that's what fangirls want. NOPE. Mh-mh. Absolutely not. Hell no.
In my heart the story was finished, and the end was quite good, when jinwoo beat the last monarch. All the rest is pure bs.
Shit i even felt sad when the chairman of the hunter association died, and it was all for nothing, even though his funeral scene was so emotional it was just wiped as if it never mattered, you wasted your tears bitch. They re dead but finally they're not dead and there was never any real danger because abracadeus ex machina, magic world peace ultimate game breaking hero and happy #!@&everybody!!!
Urghhhhh. I don't even want to know what other crap is going to annihilate the initial plot in the 14 last chapters of the epilogue. I wish i could just forget everything after the #!@&time rewind...
One more story that ended up making me sad, i feel betrayed.
I started reading it
... I don't know maybe 3 or 4 years ago, there were barely 6 chapters back then...
Can someone please pick it up?
It was long. Loooooooooong. And slooooow.
I mean, the whole kids' love story was cute and all but at some point, it started to feel endless.
Then suddenly, BAM!
The story exploded in the 25 (?) Last chapters?!
Well i didn't expect it.
What i didn't expect either was the hard time i had to determine the MC.
I felt like it switched all the time, the beginning of the story seemed to have Jiwoo as the main character, then it started to switch to dongchan, then Sunny, then dongchan again?
So... Who was the main character?
I don't know if it was a good thing or not, in the sense where it made all of them interesting, but the only one who actually got a definitive conclusion was jiwoo.
I'm still curious about dongchan and donghee's family background (and traumas), Sunny's resolution and Chulho 's history, and jiyhe's whole story.
Yet it was interesting though long af.
I also liked and got curious about the cover's pic that evolved along the story, the burnt version of it somehow broke my heart.
I said i was ready to see them turn into super saiyans any moment but these dudes are so high above humanity that they managed to absorb their own nipples.
Honestly they can fight however they want they already broke the game right from the beginning x')
How do vampires have erections without a beating heart pumping blood through their body?
Yes i know it's a stupid and pointless question, but i still have hope that somebody, somewhere, at some time, thought about it and imagined a functional theory.
Once i noticed, i couldn't ignore it.
You bet they can't communicate without eardrums.
Well beside this, it was almost interesting. Almost because nothing has been solved with yijun's parents, which seemed to be a huge part of the story, the cause of his trauma and struggles and what almost ruined his 57 chapters long emotional rollercoaster love story so honestly, it feels incomplete.
I started reading this years ago and got critically confused when they suddenly white washed this serie. I loved it so much that i kept reading even though i had lots of trouble with the characters names because it absolutely ruined the immersion and i could no longer tell who was who, and i took a break around ch300.
I missed it and noticed that there was 200 new chapters, so i reread it all from chapter 1 and now i had to stop again at chapter 370.
What the fck is this translation???
Not only the grammar is apocalyptic but it doesnt even make sense!!! Even google translate can do better, I have no idea what's going on in the jiho arc, can someone upload a proper translation please?
Or tell me where i can actually READ and UNDERSTAND it?
It would be even better if it was without that ridiculous censorship but I'm not even hung up on this anymore, I'm so fucking lost.
What just happened?
Wow that was surprisingly good.
I usually don't like stories taking place in a mmorpg environment and even worse for BL since they tend to be just a succession of cliché mmo quests that have nothing to bring to the story and just serve as a setting for random ass boring and cliché love story.
This one was more focused on the actual action even though it still lacks explanation on how the fck did it happen and DID tell a story, not just a plain and deja vu love story but a story of overcoming a trauma, and a love story is build in the background without overtaking the rest.
The character development was good and the characters were almost all either endearing or really antipathic, Arin rocks!!! She was probably my favourite character in this manwha.
I can't even explain how the immersion worked this time, like somehow entering the intimacy of my character in a game? XD
But it did work.
I also loved the fight scenes and the monsters, as well as the whole theme of the dungeons and how they depicted it.
If i really wanted to complain, it would be the messages at the end of the dungeons, blah blah was cleared by blahblah guild, it's the only thing that somehow pushed me out of the story, because it was really like a video game instead of a story. I compromised by making it out to be what people watching the dungeon on tv would see.
But i loved it.
1)
And most annoying one)
Why is there entire "chapters" of shitposting level facebook 2010?
2)
What happened to the great heavens organisation, what was their purpose, where did they pop out from, who lead this and who were the other members since we only heard about the 8 CIA traitors?
Yes, that's a long ass question that will never be answered.
3) all this shit about destroying the world and all... No consequences? Really?
4) what the fck is that ending? Why?
5)was reading the whole story totally pointless? Since there are no consequences to any actions, the main couple ends up together for no reason despite any common sense, events and situation?
ohhh I'm heartbroken imma destroy humanity (elevator music) alright now lets love each other heart heart heart heart heart heart fangirling intensifies.
6) why was there so many sex scenes interrupting the story for nothing? I mean, they didn't bring anything, they just randomly popped with no purpose in the middle of the story and... That's it. Like "here, go fap so i can resume the action you horny shit lol".
7) I don't understand the title.
Wut?
I'm greatly disappointed.
It was interesting and i liked the idea of having more than just a 60 chapters long love story, with lots of action and side characters that could be more than scenaristic tools, the art was pretty good and the translation.... Was understandable.
But in the end... There was nothing. The built up tension just went down like a failed soufflé, the main couple is so in love and absolutely not going to jail despite one of them having tried to destroy the fucking world with nuclear weapons and nothing else matters.
Yea also, obviously drawn by an asian person, the story picturing americans throughout the world yet all ethnicities bow to the protagonists... That's not a thing.
But this is just me being nitpicky, for once it didn't ruin the immersion.
And finally, RIP Stuart.