You managed to poop a baby whose head is three times the one of an adult, you can handle the fisting.
Okay, seriously now.
I almost dropped this savagery, i only stayed because the mc managed to escape at the exact right time. Gotta say the art greatly improved, pretty much in sync with that asshole main lead...and I guess the baby wasn't expected to appear, which would have been for the best.
It was cliche af, not very interesting, the beginning is badly drawn and the baby ugly as hell.the ending was exactly what you'd expect from this trope and it sucks. There WAS a serious character development but at se point, authors will have to face their fear of hysterical decerebrate fangirls and start writing some coherent stories, those kind of "happy endings" are nothing but overused clichés now.
it's time to up your game guys, take some risks and give us some real shit
I dropped it at ch 186. Honestly i liked the story, since for once in this genre the author actually explained the whole universe creation, causes and consequences. The time travel thing thew me off, I don't like time travel because it just... Well it doesn't work, it never works no matter the genre of story it's always bullshit and it didn't make exception here. Deus ex machina should be forbidden, especially when it simply erases the emotional stakes in a story.
In the end nobody died and all is well that ends well equals to thank you, fuck you for me.
It's just me though but that's how i feel about this.
But well, yea. Ch 186. Random ass love story that popped out of nowhere because that's what fangirls want. NOPE. Mh-mh. Absolutely not. Hell no.
In my heart the story was finished, and the end was quite good, when jinwoo beat the last monarch. All the rest is pure bs.
Shit i even felt sad when the chairman of the hunter association died, and it was all for nothing, even though his funeral scene was so emotional it was just wiped as if it never mattered, you wasted your tears bitch. They re dead but finally they're not dead and there was never any real danger because abracadeus ex machina, magic world peace ultimate game breaking hero and happy #!@&everybody!!!
Urghhhhh. I don't even want to know what other crap is going to annihilate the initial plot in the 14 last chapters of the epilogue. I wish i could just forget everything after the #!@&time rewind...
One more story that ended up making me sad, i feel betrayed.
I started reading it
... I don't know maybe 3 or 4 years ago, there were barely 6 chapters back then...
Can someone please pick it up?
It was long. Loooooooooong. And slooooow.
I mean, the whole kids' love story was cute and all but at some point, it started to feel endless.
Then suddenly, BAM!
The story exploded in the 25 (?) Last chapters?!
Well i didn't expect it.
What i didn't expect either was the hard time i had to determine the MC.
I felt like it switched all the time, the beginning of the story seemed to have Jiwoo as the main character, then it started to switch to dongchan, then Sunny, then dongchan again?
So... Who was the main character?
I don't know if it was a good thing or not, in the sense where it made all of them interesting, but the only one who actually got a definitive conclusion was jiwoo.
I'm still curious about dongchan and donghee's family background (and traumas), Sunny's resolution and Chulho 's history, and jiyhe's whole story.
Yet it was interesting though long af.
I also liked and got curious about the cover's pic that evolved along the story, the burnt version of it somehow broke my heart.
I said i was ready to see them turn into super saiyans any moment but these dudes are so high above humanity that they managed to absorb their own nipples.
Honestly they can fight however they want they already broke the game right from the beginning x')
How do vampires have erections without a beating heart pumping blood through their body?
Yes i know it's a stupid and pointless question, but i still have hope that somebody, somewhere, at some time, thought about it and imagined a functional theory.
Once i noticed, i couldn't ignore it.
You bet they can't communicate without eardrums.
Well beside this, it was almost interesting. Almost because nothing has been solved with yijun's parents, which seemed to be a huge part of the story, the cause of his trauma and struggles and what almost ruined his 57 chapters long emotional rollercoaster love story so honestly, it feels incomplete.
I started reading this years ago and got critically confused when they suddenly white washed this serie. I loved it so much that i kept reading even though i had lots of trouble with the characters names because it absolutely ruined the immersion and i could no longer tell who was who, and i took a break around ch300.
I missed it and noticed that there was 200 new chapters, so i reread it all from chapter 1 and now i had to stop again at chapter 370.
What the fck is this translation???
Not only the grammar is apocalyptic but it doesnt even make sense!!! Even google translate can do better, I have no idea what's going on in the jiho arc, can someone upload a proper translation please?
Or tell me where i can actually READ and UNDERSTAND it?
It would be even better if it was without that ridiculous censorship but I'm not even hung up on this anymore, I'm so fucking lost.
What just happened?
Wow that was surprisingly good.
I usually don't like stories taking place in a mmorpg environment and even worse for BL since they tend to be just a succession of cliché mmo quests that have nothing to bring to the story and just serve as a setting for random ass boring and cliché love story.
This one was more focused on the actual action even though it still lacks explanation on how the fck did it happen and DID tell a story, not just a plain and deja vu love story but a story of overcoming a trauma, and a love story is build in the background without overtaking the rest.
The character development was good and the characters were almost all either endearing or really antipathic, Arin rocks!!! She was probably my favourite character in this manwha.
I can't even explain how the immersion worked this time, like somehow entering the intimacy of my character in a game? XD
But it did work.
I also loved the fight scenes and the monsters, as well as the whole theme of the dungeons and how they depicted it.
If i really wanted to complain, it would be the messages at the end of the dungeons, blah blah was cleared by blahblah guild, it's the only thing that somehow pushed me out of the story, because it was really like a video game instead of a story. I compromised by making it out to be what people watching the dungeon on tv would see.
But i loved it.
1)
And most annoying one)
Why is there entire "chapters" of shitposting level facebook 2010?
2)
What happened to the great heavens organisation, what was their purpose, where did they pop out from, who lead this and who were the other members since we only heard about the 8 CIA traitors?
Yes, that's a long ass question that will never be answered.
3) all this shit about destroying the world and all... No consequences? Really?
4) what the fck is that ending? Why?
5)was reading the whole story totally pointless? Since there are no consequences to any actions, the main couple ends up together for no reason despite any common sense, events and situation?
ohhh I'm heartbroken imma destroy humanity (elevator music) alright now lets love each other heart heart heart heart heart heart fangirling intensifies.
6) why was there so many sex scenes interrupting the story for nothing? I mean, they didn't bring anything, they just randomly popped with no purpose in the middle of the story and... That's it. Like "here, go fap so i can resume the action you horny shit lol".
7) I don't understand the title.
Wut?
I'm greatly disappointed.
It was interesting and i liked the idea of having more than just a 60 chapters long love story, with lots of action and side characters that could be more than scenaristic tools, the art was pretty good and the translation.... Was understandable.
But in the end... There was nothing. The built up tension just went down like a failed soufflé, the main couple is so in love and absolutely not going to jail despite one of them having tried to destroy the fucking world with nuclear weapons and nothing else matters.
Yea also, obviously drawn by an asian person, the story picturing americans throughout the world yet all ethnicities bow to the protagonists... That's not a thing.
But this is just me being nitpicky, for once it didn't ruin the immersion.
And finally, RIP Stuart.
I can no longer stand those pointless comments interrupting me every 4 panels just to spout random shits.
It's like watching a movie with with your 6 years old cousin who talks non stop about what's happening, it's driving me mad fr
Please give back the immersion, I'm trying to read a story here who the fck are you??? Get out of my #!@& house and let me read in peace.
Wait a minute.
I just went through the comment section and i see a way bigger problem than horny baby fujoshis trying to impose BL as the ultimate genre here.
I would like to deliver a message to the main audience of this book:
What that dude whose name i forgot did, is called RAPE, ok? The girl whose name i also forgot
(damn what an interesting book and endearing characters!)
Clearly said NO.
Even if that perverted and most likely virgin author drew her pussy ultra wet, looking like it literally exploded, she said NO.
You must know that lubrication is a physiological response of the body that has nothing to do with neither pleasure nor consent. We can lubricate when we're doing sports and even when we shit, ok?
Than this whole book, and as ridiculous.
Should have come straight here instead of waisting my time on some teenager s fantasy x')
Did it have to be a yaoi urghhhhhh
Or THIS kind of yaoi...
Their relationship as father and son was so sweet, so touching, i even felt my eyes wetting at some specific parts...
The story was also interesting though incoherent af, i mean... Wht is this world where no form of legal authority exist?
I didn't [dislike] the book but i would have loved it without this fucked up relationship that has no other intent than to show sex and make the story 20 chapters longer.
Oh and I'm very curious about the big brother heir that totally fell in a plot hole, he disappeared so brutally that i spent the rest of the story wondering what in hell happened to him and the whole organisation since Nanmu &co keep going to work even after the boss assassination. What's their job btw?
Somehow feels like the author... Forgot.
Another manwha that makes me sad.
Am i getting bored of yaoi? Should i try something else?
I'll take recommendations gratefully.
And seriously i dont get it. Did you guys switch to another manwha in the middle and mistakingly commmented here??
Wtf seriously that protagonist is introduced as a hardworking young man struggling for money and in just a few chapters, he became a capricious shit throwing a fit because his vacation with his pretend husband get interrupted??? This is called regression, okay, and it's not how character development works.
I feel NOTHING between those two and NOTHING for them individually, and the "development" of the story is pure bullshit i couldn't immerse myself in even if i bleached my brain and made pop corn out of the neurones in it.
Did i miss something?
Where is the cuteness? Where is the chemistry? Where is the logic? Where is the common sense???
Okay, so first, not story related-
But this publishing company whose name shall not be pronounced here or your comment disappears, is getting worse by the day.
Their typesetting is more and more fucked up and the frequency of typos is getting closer to the number of wrong choices i made in my life.
I'm 40 and naive af, i made A LOT.
The story now. Well... It was okay.
Season 1was hilarious,
Season something else was interesting
(I think i saw 3 seasons but icant really tell which starts/ends where),
Conclusion is pretty... Bland.
The art is... Honestly some backgrounds on some panels are crazy good, but the chara design is cute but basic.
And Evan somehow fell into a plot hole at some point. He did his scenaristic tool's job of being a potential love rival then poof, nothing more even though he gave some antagonist vibes.
I don't have much to say, it's a bit of a let down.
Oh and i can't get past the fact that sparkleslucy piss like a male dog. This is anatomically impossible for a female.
Not even gonna rant about these not at all korean characters sometimes bow and call each other hyung, it's pointless given paragraph 1.
It was seriously dragging on but i loved the ending.... Till ch 99.
WHAT THE FUCK MAN WHY???? IT'S ALL WASTED FOR NOTHING, IT WAS FUCKING BEAUTIFUL AND MEANINGFUL THEN SUDDENLY CRASH!!! NOTHING!!!
ALL the pride you felt for that STRONG ASS MC and the ANGER toward that piece of shit, BANG! SMASHED!!! EVAPORATED!! DISSIPATED!!! THEY JUST END UP TOGETHER BECAUSE FUCK ME!
SERIOUSLY???
OH HELL I FEEL BETRAYED ON A PERSONAL LEVEL HERE!
That yawhi is what we call in french "un forceur" and yes, it means exactly what it looks like it could mean.
He selfishly forced his way into every fucking thing, up to the very end and i felt no affection for this character, never. Even the uploader stepped into his game trying to force us readers to cheer for him when really there's never been a reason to.and the author complied ffs i cant believe it.
The story was perfect and conveyed a beautiful message and it's all gone to waste.
So that's it??? The mc HAD to end up with one of the ml regardless of all the work done on a beautiful story just to satisfy brainless oppressive fangirls? Shit!
That story went to 4* to 1*, it was a huge fucking waste of my time and emotions.
Well emotions are gross anyways, how do i uninstall them?