
IS THIS GOOD? IS THE ROMANCE BAD? IS THIS OK TO READ?? OPINIONS OPINIONS

frankly it couldve been better. the beginning was really good but in the middle it started to tone down a bit? plus the endgame seems too forced. i dont particularly have any problems with him cause my anger defused when i read the novel. but i just wish they couldve put more emphasis on how and why they end up together cause if this were reality, it wouldnt have worked out

They make the FL to be this "sword fighting, intelligent, political savvy, virtuous, brave, strong" Mary Sue but at the end she just acts like a dumb ditzy oblivious teenage girl and ends up with the jerk anyway. Pretty standard shoujo sbullshit, i'd say. If that's the kind of trope you're into, then go for it.

Elise slander? I DONT WANNA FUCKIN HEAR IT, AT ALL. yall are ridiculous, the fact that she accepted the fact that she was back into the life she died in is enough. She was suffering the whole time without telling anyone she even managed to change her fate! EVEN NOW SHE IS TRYING TO STOP BLOOD SHED. SHE JUST WANTS TO SAVE PEOPLE.
THIS IS SO CUTE BYE