Ok there was a few plot holes in this story...
firstly at the start of chapter one yellow dragon kills his mother and his brother.. but they never explain why. Also I didn’t know yellow dragon had family because he was originally a snake.. and Yooshin is apart of him but he’s not yooshin right?
Then there was one guy whose face was blurre but he was wearing revealing clothing, was laying down and smiling.. he said something low “yellow dragon is competing? Well this is interesting” idk something like that.. but we never saw him again.
Lastly (this is all I can remember for now) what was the point of the ex boyfriend? Like with or without him he had no purpose. They could’ve used anyone to replace heeon-? (Black tortoise’s girlfriend) like why have the ex there when he only showed up for two chapters to do nothing.
Don’t get me wrong, the story is amazing I loved this a lot, but idk if the author just forgot abt those details or what bc they left me a little confused.
I’ve been reading this since I was in grade 5
PLEASE- WHAT GRADE ARE YOU IN NOW--
Nine almost ten
I was either reading this at the end of grade five or near the start of grade six. I think probably grade six. Not five..
Bro.. that long--
ITS STILL NOT FRICKEN FINISHED-
I even follow the artist on Instagram
I really wanted him to end up with Dane. Keith only liked him back bc he couldn’t have sex with anyone else. He continuously showed through his actions that he only cared about the child.. he wouldn’t let the uke (ya I forgot his name ahah) do anything he wanted anymore. This was just a toxic relationship smh. :/
If someone left me to die, I wouldn’t want to date them or even see them again. (Insert semes name) deserved so much better.
This story was good but I hate woojin. :/
I think u would run for ur life too if u were 14 and witnessed such thing :/
I can understand that he was scared.. but if someone I loved was getting beat up and nearly dying, I wouldn’t be running away. It’s hard to say what my actions would be since luckily I haven’t experienced that.. but if I could help it I know I wouldn’t immediately think of running away without seeking help at least.
But that’s not what I was taking about.. I’m talking about if it was me who was getting beat up and then watching my loved one run away from me while I beg them to save me. If someone did that to me, no matter their age, there’s no way I could love them again.
And I didn’t mention that I hated woojin just because he left the seme. I can understand why he ran, my actions are obviously going to be different from other peoples actions.
I just hate woojins character, and feel bad for the seme who was a seemingly pretty normal guy. He knew what woojin was like so he brought it on himself though. :/
I read this because I thought it’d be heartwarming. I love dramatic stories but I read them so much so I wanted to read something fluffy... ahahah I was shocked but this story was so amazing. A real gem.
This was super cute.. but the translating seemed off? Sometimes they didn’t make sense. Well whatever, this is an illegal website anyways lol.
am I the only one who got second hand embarrassment? I had to leave some chapters to call myself down then come back.
LMFAO SAME
Guys.. the purpose of this is just smut. If you wanna read this for the story then read -Body complex. That’s the story that this is based off of.
This wasn’t bad but it wasn’t great. I don’t read GL and I probably won’t continue to, but this didn’t really need all the hate.
Yes, they cheated, yes the relationship was kinda toxic.
But ya’ll are glossing over the fact that the one guy was abusive af. Honestly I think the abusive boyfriend likes takeda.
That’s horrible to hear the author wants to kill herself.. I really hope she gets help. Hopefully she isn’t just saying that so people would stop uploading on illegal websites.. but even if that were true I’d much prefer that then someone being suicidal.
If I were her I’d maybe take a break, then come back to complete this story or just stop making stories all together.
Sadly with this career you’ll get people uploading it illegally no matter what you do. It’s sad but that’s just the truth. If she can’t handle that, then for her own metal wellbeing I’d say she should stop.
Maybe she’s better suited being someone’s art assistant? Like mangakas-? Sometimes have art assistances to soften the work load, this might be better for her. She can still work in this type of career but not have to worry about her profit being taken away?
The author of ‘pink heart jam’ had a problem with people uploading her work illegally so she threatened to stop the story and took a break from uploading. Soon after she started uploading chapters again but most of the websites the were big stopped uploading and she got her profit.
That’s what this author should do.