whilst going down my list of stories to read i came across this one, when reading the description i wasn’t too sure if i liked the plot and i was so close to removing it from my list and not reading it but i decided to give it a chance and im so glad i did
100% recommend to anyone
there are certain stories where it feels like there has to be some sort of smut in it otherwise it’ll either be like 5 chapters or it would just be a bore
i loved this one tho, the story really didn’t need the smut (even tho i did like it (▰˘◡˘▰) ) to give it a great plot
i really likes the first couple and wasn’t a big fan of the blue haired guy (i’m shut with names) because of his past with the previous couple but, towards the end, i think i like them more than the first couple
one thing i do wish that we got to see was the blue haired guy meeting up and apologising to the first couple i think that would be nicer
lots of plot filler and honestly i feel like it could be a whole lot longer as like they were rushed into a relationship in the second episode but then i also feel like there’s lots in there that isn’t needed but i do still quite like the story and where it came to at the “end”
it does say completed but it isn’t
idrk what was going on, it has a storyline in place but also had lots of filler and towards the end just kinda drifted off
there was definitely a plot to the story and a storyline in in place but i do feel like half of the chapters were smut purely to fill the story out a bit
don’t get me wrong i enjoyed it and all but i wish there was more story to it
Honestly, I truly love this story and have been following it since a few months after it first started. I did feel like the last 10-15 chapters were a little rushed and I got a little lost at points but, with a general understanding of the plot you can grasp what's happening
I liked the fact that we were guests to the wedding at the end that was a nice touch I dont think ive ever seen before
im sad that the story has ended but im happy to have been a part of it
it seems sort of cute but tbh i didn’t really understand what was going on and i don’t think i ever will
i really liked the storyline, i did think the ending was a bit rushed but i feel like they left space for side stories
the one thing i didn’t like was that the art style changed so close to the end it threw me off and i wasn’t a big fan
don’t get me wrong, i really like the ending in terms of them starting there relationship, it was really cute and a nice way to end that part but then i feel like there’s so much more that could be shown, for example, the family and him getting over the misunderstanding, the semes ex said he wanted to speak to him that could’ve been another chapter
there’s so much more that could’ve come from the storyline but it just ended after they spoke again and started there relationship
no no no this can’t end - side stories please, give it to me please, rachel give it to me
i wanna see the baby ╥﹏╥
everything about this story is so cute
the assume, the plot, the seme is such a green flag and treats the uke so well i love it so much (≧∀≦)
tbh, ignoring all the obvious shitting stuff that happened, the first 2 chapters were quite good and well paced but then the last chapter just flew by like i feel like that could’ve been another 2 chapters in itself but it just wasn’t
this was so cute and pure omg i didn’t expect to love it this much i want more!!!!
the part that i love so much about omegaverse stories that always makes my heart melt is when they build a nest i love it so much ╥﹏╥
don’t get me wrong i sort of get the plot however i just feel like it was so rushed and it didn’t make sense towards the end
it could’ve been a really good story but the end was just rushed and it feels so incomplete
this story is actually quite cute and sweet, idk what’s going on in the random chapters about someone playing the piano but the main story is lovely
honestly idk what happened, i think the story had a good plot but the translation just made 0 sense so idk what was going on most of the time