
lezhin changed the “now i cry because of you my lord” with “now i get drunk because of you my lord” but, most importantly, changed “even if i were to die, i don’t expect you to change” with a trivial “i won’t weep over you my lord”, i feel like it was much more meaningful before

No it didn't. NK has never cried because of his feelings for SH, so it didn't make sense for him to say that "I cry because of you my lord". However it does make sense that he got drunk because he's worried about his feelings.
The fact that he says "I won't weep over you" also displays his combative spirit. It also makes a lot more sense for him to say that because in the next scene he refuses to walk alongside SH and even says "I won't go with you my lord".

i just want mafuyu to let yuki go... not a negative way don’t get me wrong, i just want him to live his love with uenoyama genuinely; obviously i know it’s hard to forget someone who was so important in your life, yuki was and will always be a part of him, but mafuyu needs to realize that yuki is his past, now ue is his present and hopefully his future

This is also my thought. I like Yuki and I know he is important to Mafuyu but like I just wanted Mafuyu and Uenoyama to be happy and so in love with each other. Sometimes, I feel bad for Uenoyama because somehow it looks like he is a rebound :(((( but also sometimes I kinda feel that Mafuyu really love him too ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄
I thought that the top 3 all were getting tuition money but I guess I’m wrong? Maybe i imagined it
Jiwook is 12th.
The rest of my reply didn't show for some reason??? He got 12th place but the panel where he says it is missing.
ohhh that makes sense, im so sorry my baby deserved better