what I need to see happen to my boy Donald (in the present)
1 he finds somebody to pat his head(!!!!!)
and tell him he's doing great
2 he finds a lost child like him (in hospital maybe?) and goes to take care of him (-> family)
3 his name subtly under scholarships, orphanages/children's homes
and even if unreasonable (but if we get phillip kim and other's redemption for whatever reason)
4 him and myles meeting up like old times/their understanding between each other like old times
ml's too bland (writing wise).
she's too good for him (her 1st life is the goat, this story with good romance or no romance >> )
he didnt support her first life enough
I wish she would fall in love way more slowly and focus on goals esp since he's jus nice which I get she likes but (it lacks depth, I get they're both lonely but idk their interactions... )
ig he jus needs to hurry up and recognize her
praying for good plot devices/development, no more kidnapping pls
(not every male next to her needs to love her it's overdone)









I need to see every millisecond of those skipped 3 years, each and every fight of his....