the relationship development is amazing but what shocks me even more was seos BACKBONE my gosh i have NEVER in my life seen such refusal from an uke during a semes redemption arc and his adamant refusal pissed me off so much which makes me so HAPPY BECAUSE HE WASNT A PUSHOVER. but- i have a few comments about the story
seo was portrayed as this family guy who cares all about his family but after a few chapters we BARELY see his family, i barely even realized his grandma was in the hospital, and he has like… no older brother instinct??? you’d think he’d coddle his younger brother and wish to protect him and shit but like??? none of that happens? brother basically disappears from the story which is so uncharacteristic for seo whos portrayed as someone who’d do ANYTHING for his family.
don’t even get my started on the smut. this book felt like pure smut with a side of story. wtf. i can count the amount of genuine conversations they’ve had on one hand. they screw more than they freakin talk to each other.
also, why the hell do we know little to NOTHING about kwon after almost A HUNDRED chapters??? like hello???? like we literally only know how family drama but we never got to learn anything about HIM which is so disappointing. dude literally SMIILED for the FIRST time in the LAST chapter
also what ended up happening to the blonde dude like hello??
overall their relationship is cute but the story is lacking severely which thus makes the read anxiety inducing and questionable all throughout. (also their chemistry is lowkey lacking which is probably due to them fucking every three seconds and not having any genuine moments together. and when they DO have genuine moments… we BARELY see it??) author decides to give us all the smut but make all of their genuine hang outs and dates happen in a monologue so we don’t get to actually see any of it and feel their chemistry…. sigh what a shame. this had such great potential but feels like the author cares more about smut than the actual story.
I Hate nothing more than wasted potential. I cry atleast once a day thinking what this story could be but wasn't. The characters were well written and the plot was there but the author didn't know what to do with it. I think they are immensely talented in the art section like easily one of the best art I've ever seen but lacks story writing and plot building which are obviously the main elements of a story alongside good art.
So many questions that were left unanswered like you asked what happened to the blond actor? They should've shown the consequences of his actions because what he did to yeon oh wasn't just some your typical kdrama high school bullying. He drugged him and tried to SA him on camera Even after learning about the incident why Jaehyuk didn't do anything? And his personal assistant's attitude towards seo was so disparaging. Also as I'm writing this I just realised we didn't see him in the last season at all. Did Jaehyuk removed him? What happened?
And why was seo's grandma in the hospital.
They never really showed her character EVER!!! Which I think is really wierd because I thought they would've been close because she always kinda used to protect him from his shitty father.
He had a sweet bond with his younger brother too. Which was again never showcased later in the story.
The revenge and the hype that was created around the usb but they never showed the execution? What actually happened at trial? They never showed in the single chapter how Jaehyuk won the trial which was like one of the biggest part of the plot!! Again Jaehyuk's backstory about his mother's murder and his revenge was good but not even once did they do anything to show it. I feel like as the story was coming to the end the author was just desperate to complete it.
Also the side stories had nothing. Where were the real conversations? And why do we not know anything about Jeahyuk? In the entire story we never got to know his pov. What does he think? What kind of person he actually is? I mean we get it he's hot mysterious lone wolf daddy who don't talk much, dominating, have a big dick, well mannered, successful, ridiculously rich, dgaf attitude but beyond that what are his characteristics. What does he like besides Seo Yeon oh. We don't know anything.
Anyway still one of my favs cuz I love the characters so much but still wished it could reach to its potential. Because this god level of art deserved so much and the story was really good.
“so this is how it’s gonna be huh?”
BICH UVE DONE NOTHING BUT TREAT HIM LIKE SHIT AND EVEN NOW U THINK MONEY CAN BUY HIM PLEASE U HAVE NOOO AUDACITY TO SAY THAT damn really wanted a chase/redemption arc but looks like we gotta wait just a bit more for that… BUT IM SO GLAD THEY FINALLY MET AGAIN AHHH
prosecutors profile coming up second instead of the white haired lead just PROVES THAT AUTHOR PREFERS PROSECUTOR AND MC WILL END UP WITH HIS RATTY ASS.
if he does, it’ll honestly ruin the manwha so much. not just because we like white haired more, but because mc’s chemistry with white hair is SO GOOD. they banter, they argue, they get along, white hair is so sweet and considerate…. it’ll honestly be so ugly and honestly just plain annoying asf if author decides to pull some dumb shit and make him end up with prosecutor. i’m tired of authors choosing then lead who has no actual chemistry with mc and just sucks.
It's probably because of how the story is progressing
why tf is no one talking about how suho literally GROOMED MC. they were in a “relationship since mc was in middle school and when mc was in highschool, suho was a whole ADULT!!!!! that is nasty and i get the ickiest vibes whenever suho comes up. now don’t get me wrong, ML is an ASSHOLE. and i don’t care what people say, MC is adorable as heck and has my heart
Can’t bring myself to finish this bc of that
we all thought the first couple were the main characters but in reality, they’re were the side characters in seonwoos life ah this felt like it was seonwoos book lmfao but i’m so happy he got his happy ending. it seems that because of his horrible upbringing and literal abandonment, he developed a skewed sense of the world and people around him hence he was an asshole because he had horrible thoughts and assumptions about everyone. i don’t blame him and i’m glad he got a happy ending.
also lmfso i love how taeseo looks absolutely evil and cunning yet in this webtoon he was nothing but the sweetest, simplest man. in any other webtoon, taeseos character design would definitely be the villain/evil 2nd lead LMAO this was a nice read but it also felt like both couples had more intercourse than they did conversations
his whole life, naui had an attitude, was snarky, feisty, and never took peoples bs. it feels like we totally lost all of that once he started falling for the seme, i admit he’s gonna be nicer to the ones he loves but even to others like the semes jerk silver haired friend, he completely changed. i love a feisty and snarky uke because we don’t see them often. i’m sad that his original personality seems to have completely disappeared and yeah it was a bit annoying but it was also adoring. also the seme was an asshole in the beginning and i hated how he got upset at naui having a snarky attitude towards him when he did nothing but be an ass to him and coerce him multiple times like hon it goes both ways.
all this to say, if anyone knows of any webtoons or whatever where the uke is strong willed and feisty and doesn’t back down, pls lemme know
can’t think straight
checkmate
and love is blind
are the only ones i know of
You and I Can't Do This is sooo good
just wow. if ur thinking about reading this… DONT. absolutely horrible. plot is amazing of course but the romance is NOT there. if u like killing stalking then you’d love this. i read 64 chapters and not ONCE did i feel sympathy or connection towards the seme. dude was a total bot and not ONCE did he communicate his thoughts or feelings. the nicest shit he said the whole story was in chapter 63 “i cant live without you” THAT WAS THE NICEST THING HE SAID THE ENTIRE STORY. uke pisses me off for being the one to constantly go back and also get himself into stupid situations instead of saying no. also there’s SO much shit we don’t know like the semes backstory with his fam, that idol who literally was killed by hanging, etc. the story began with a seme with no heart and feelings and basically ended the same way. no proper romance and definitely no chemistry between the two. it was a horrible read and i stuck out to the end because i was hoping the uke would kill himself or the seme would die lmfak
bless this comment you saved my life
this feels.. so HEALTHY?? FOR A CONTRACT RELATIONSHIP. dude was offering her money then realized how rude that was and apologized and offered her protection instead?! AHH I LOVEEE A RESPECTFUL MAN, also her backBONE?! DONT EVEN GET ME STARTEDDDD I LOVE FEMALE LEADS WHO DONT TAKE OTHER PEOPLES SHITS AND THIS GIRL NEVER DOES I OFFICIALLY LOVE AJD CLAIM HER AS MY FAVORITE FEMALE LEAD EVER