nooooo! this had soooo much potential. the premise of the story was interesting enough. I also like the characters but there are just soooo many unresolved and unexplained thingssssss!
I still love it though
Please let it be resolved immediately!!!!!!! Because we all know it's coming!!!!!!!!!!!!
I agree with one of the comments that the last 2 chaps was not enough to give us closure.
However, I don't want to see him have dinner with the useless dad and jerk brother. They don't deserve the precious Tomoe. They need to beg for his forgiveness first, before the dinner.
Ugh!
I just wish there are more happy moments for Tomoe and he doesn't have to deal with his family.
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I don't usually read tragedy stories, but this one I'll happily re-read over and over.
I agree with the comments on here that this is a good representation of what we usually believe about demons. They are destined to fail at love.
Although, personally, as someone who avoids tragedy stories, I would have preferred a happy ending. Of both J and M loving each other finally. Or M finding love for himself.
This is still a good story. The characters and the progression is just as well written as I remembered it when I first started reading this.
HOWEVER, the unnecessary sex was a huge turn off. The reasoning behind it, made absolutely no sense. There was already enough angst and tension in this story. It didn't help develop their characters whatsoever and it was not necessary to move the story forward. there was a loooot of stuff happening already.
Also, to have sex with someone else because you can't have sex with the one you "love"? I mean, come on, that's one shitty excuse if I see one.
But of course, that issue will def be pushed to the side because it was really not necessary in the first place.
Ugh. Now I can't read this anymore.
The only silver lining in this is they don't end up together.
But seriously, this story doesn't make sense. And I only read through til the end because I keep forgetting to remove this from my reading list and I keep forgetting what the story was about.
The way the uke immediately realized seme's inferiority in their relationship and his willingness to identify the problem is maturity that is very rare.
I was annoyed at first with Naho because he's just so naive and blind and unaware but he is just a little precious child.
He should just forget about his childhood friend who is a coward and the jerks! ugh! And for Kana not to say anything to Naho! It just goes to show that he's looking down on him too. He may be thinking that he's being kind and all, but it's all the same. ugh!