I really like it, except for the MC's black dot eyes.. I don't get why they are like that, unless it's suppose to be part of the story somehow.. if it's just an artistic decision to make her quirky, I don't know why honestly, but I just can't like it. No feelings in the eyes, is probably why, but also, it just looks fake and pulls me out of the story.
I found that epilogue so annoying. Why would you play games with your partner you just got after a long time? I've seen this kind of epilogue before, I wish authors would stop copying each other and think of something new. That was an exercise in frustration reading that, not entertaining to me at all.
After watching a sincere story, it's feels off to see a story about 'sponsoring', begging for it, and with a character I liked previously.. if I am right, isn't the seme the guy who was a good friend to the MC when he first was in trouble and left the group?
Yea I really don't think his character would do that. He seems to be playing along so Hajin doesn't go around trying to find a sponsor and really find himself in a bad situation, but I think he could have just explained the situation instead. Idk, the secondary couple also had a dubious start in Heat and Run. I love the stories overall and the characters, but I'm so frustrated with this author's writing style.
yea, I'm waiting to see how it goes with the 'sponsor' storyline, if the character remains true to character and is more protective than predator.
I feel sometimes authors suddenly write in grape scenes and turn dark to either please their editors, trying to keep an audience, or something.. I don't trust them haha
That chapter was a mess really.. It prob needs to be looked at and re-uploaded. sorry.
Second, wow, that was just a weird side road she took about "Rick".. I'm not saying it's impossible to think of that as a possibility , I'm saying it grows old to have 'Americans' thrown under the bus again . There are gay people all over the world. Some are just more suppressed. Doesn't mean they're not there. And it follows that he might be gay because he had lots of relationships with women? ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ I'm tired.











I have no idea why this story devolved into something so aimless and boring.. but have fun everyone. I'm out
That's what "you" think. It's pretty interesting in our opinion that's why we are still reading it
Downbad, well you can't speak for everyone right? There's some that agree with me. And ofc, it IS what I think, that's why I wrote it.. but I was just speaking for me, and wished everyone who was enjoying it to have fun.. I guess that offended you, huh?.. weird..