yes, it was fast paced and too short, but the art and story were awesome. That's why we want more.
I had you tortured because I care about you?! Let's not embarrass me in front of bystanders? Why does the author write this s*it? I stopped reading this and skipped so much because it's just sick. I dropped in to see what the redemption arc would look like. It looks bleak, impossible, there is no way he should ever be forgiven.
This feels totally like the calm before the storm. I really hope this doesn't get too gritty and angsty. The way the seme looks at the uke is so sweet.
And grew into a deeper story that I actually felt moved by. The artist draws the seme's expressions so well, that every time he was hurt, so was I haha
I mean , I'm to chapter 5 and I think I'm going to let it go. The second hand embarrassment is not fun when it is repeated ad nauseam.
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I am really enjoying this.. I am sad that Abel will die, but actually happy I am forewarned about it. About him turning into a twink, I will see how it plays out . Because so far this has been written well, making me care about many characters and be shocked and sad for others.
yea, nothing about that last scene did I like. I don't like to see begging, I don't like his thoughts about her.. I mean, I understand character growth and slow burn, but that scene just diminished both of them in my eyes.
I'm sure I'm the only one, but I just didn't care for this. I would have liked a more complex story. This is smut for smut's sake, not that that's bad, haha... I just saw an opportunity for a story I might like.. where he stays a beta.. He could either be reborn and doesn't go through with the marriage and his ex doesn't allow omega's to be brought in and end up with his beta... OR..He's not reborn, he divorces the husband and finds a beta who loves him.. or any other more interesting story.. to me, :)
I don't remember much of all the things that have happened, but I'm glad it's starting up again and the oracle has arrived. No more " when the oracle gets here" turmoil.
The story makes me tense, I worry for them, but the art will keep me coming back. Beautiful.
I do understand about the historical time, but I hope he explains at some point in detail about what was happening in chap 14. Just promising it won't happen again leaves too much to the imagination and causes me not to like him. So far, this has given me the impression that he fell in love with her when they met and his easily misunderstood behaviors are just that, misunderstood. I do not want to think he was truly about to cheat, and I don't think so now... but he needs to make it clear to me, otherwise, I'm divorcing him :)
