
I had a really hard time figuring out why this feels wrong or off.....But I guess it wasn't convincing at all... I know, I'm being awfully rude, but it all felt like someone gave some dolls lines to say that kind of fit the genre... I felt like reading a script with only the spoken lines and none of the thoughts or atmosphere or body language... The art was great but the story felt non existing and the cheesy/cringe lines was delivered but not even convincingly.... It wasn't bad exactly, it just felt really off....

I usually get a little iffy when something's too sweet.
Even if I'm reading something wholesome and fluffy, I like just a tiny bit of salt with the sugar, just to balance it out, but this was really good even if it was more than my daily allowed intake of sugar.... AND it was funny - Miho cracked me up...
So this wasn't comedy, but I laughed way too much at times I really shouldn't..... Like I cackled like a maniac at the helicopter thing....
I feel like I've read this story a hundred times already... I knew exactly what they were going to say and where the plot was going.... I don't really mind this type of plot at all, but man this one was extremely forgettable....
I get what you mean so much. I was literally cracking up at every part, I thought it was a 2000s bl parody at