This story felt like there's a ton of missing pages throughout the entire thing. Both in terms of their relationship but also in terms of the whole business/inheritance/family plot that feels like the author has written everything but then cut entire segments out every 10 pages of the final story, so you're left with a very shallow end product.
I quite like complicated plots, but there was too many supposedly complicated characters and plots that were never actually shown. There's no reason to make every character uniquely complicated with very complicated connections, if you're not going to dive into it and show us how, they got there.
I don't know much about business, but for it to be a plot that's interesting to read about, I feel like you need to actually show us the work that's put into it and not just tell us in long sentences about what needs to be done and then skip to now it's done.... That's not interesting at all.
It's not a horrible story at all, but it isn't really good either which is a shame because it had sooo much potential. I want to read this story! just in a better version...
Enough ranting from me. I'm probably going to leave this un-rated, because I just don't know...
My siblings r worth a Big Mac
BUT these r the BEST BLs and ones with lots of potential. List has a bit of everything - HIDDEN GEMS, fluff, drama, action, horror, psychological and is always updating with some moved to 2nd top tier bl list.
Wont include 2 with the same couple. Not a fan of pwp, romantisized rape, dubcon, blackmail, infedelity, pedophilia, incest, etc.
Description: summary → tags → comment → rating
Open to suggestions
YOU'D MAKE ME RLLY HAPPY BY RECOMMENDING THIS LIST :))
This story was so mediocre, I can't even hate it, because I've already forgotten most of it. I really wanted to like it since we/I need more stories about more dom/power bottoms and submissive tops as well as more stories about switch/vers couples but this wasn't it... sorry...
Him: "I got you a gift"
Me: "It's 100% a person. I'll put money on Horse-guy"
Toma Sugawa is a cool-headed, unsociable businessman. For some reason, he's not in a relationsh...
- Author: Suzushiro
- Genres: Yaoi / Adult / Mature / Smut / Comedy
[Pushy Younger Boss x Lone Wolf Older Subordinate]A heartwarming office romance that begins with two...
- Author: Minamoya kazuki
- Genres: Yaoi
I sort of expected to get a story with some elements of realism because of the tittle. Real people actions, scenarios, feelings, problems... But instead I got something very very far from that. Like it wasn't even close to being how two people interact and the story felt more like separate scenes playing out rather than a fluent plotline.
It wasn't bad exactly, and I'm not mad, I read it. Just completely forgettable to me.
I'll give this a 7 because, I'm in a good mood, but it's nowhere near the 9.2 it's rated right now in my opinion. It's very mediocre.
Hairdresser Harutaka is a super-fan of Reiichi Himemiya, the guitarist of the legendary rock band Th...
- Author: Iyada
- Genres: Yaoi / Adult / Mature / Drama
Shiraishi Kei is a talented freelance beautician who's experienced more downs than ups when it ...
- Author: Tomo serizawa
- Genres: Yaoi / Adult / Smut / Drama / Romance
If all of you really think you're standing up for queer people by crucifying this young girl you are sadly mistaken and to be honest a little on the stupid side. Whether she is queer or not, she's the spitting image of thousands of desperately scared young queer people who grew up being taught and told they're wrong and hated. And what do terrified people do when someone they care about is about to possibly get hurt by this hate, they come up with stupid ideas..... None of this is cause for such blatant ignorant hate from you hypocrites.... So please shut your faces (me telling you to shut up, does not mean I expect you to do it, nor do I think you're not allowed to speak.... but please? reflect a little at least...)