I am utterly perplexed by my own mental fortitude to have made it through 36 chapters of this.... I almost feel proud. Like I've somehow evolved my mental endurance. It's either that or I'm going insane, because this is soooo bad...
I'm sorry, but I don't get the enthusiasm for this one. To me it was very mid. I'm not mad, I spend my time reading it, but I'm also not really happy about it.... I feel like, I've just done a load of laundry...
This story felt like there's a ton of missing pages throughout the entire thing. Both in terms of their relationship but also in terms of the whole business/inheritance/family plot that feels like the author has written everything but then cut entire segments out every 10 pages of the final story, so you're left with a very shallow end product.
I quite like complicated plots, but there was too many supposedly complicated characters and plots that were never actually shown. There's no reason to make every character uniquely complicated with very complicated connections, if you're not going to dive into it and show us how, they got there.
I don't know much about business, but for it to be a plot that's interesting to read about, I feel like you need to actually show us the work that's put into it and not just tell us in long sentences about what needs to be done and then skip to now it's done.... That's not interesting at all.
It's not a horrible story at all, but it isn't really good either which is a shame because it had sooo much potential. I want to read this story! just in a better version...
Enough ranting from me. I'm probably going to leave this un-rated, because I just don't know...
This story was so mediocre, I can't even hate it, because I've already forgotten most of it. I really wanted to like it since we/I need more stories about more dom/power bottoms and submissive tops as well as more stories about switch/vers couples but this wasn't it... sorry...
Him: "I got you a gift"
Me: "It's 100% a person. I'll put money on Horse-guy"
Toma Sugawa is a cool-headed, unsociable businessman. For some reason, he's not in a relationsh...
- Author: Suzushiro
- Genres: Yaoi / Adult / Mature / Smut / Comedy
[Pushy Younger Boss x Lone Wolf Older Subordinate]A heartwarming office romance that begins with two...
- Author: Minamoya kazuki
- Genres: Yaoi
I sort of expected to get a story with some elements of realism because of the tittle. Real people actions, scenarios, feelings, problems... But instead I got something very very far from that. Like it wasn't even close to being how two people interact and the story felt more like separate scenes playing out rather than a fluent plotline.
It wasn't bad exactly, and I'm not mad, I read it. Just completely forgettable to me.
I'll give this a 7 because, I'm in a good mood, but it's nowhere near the 9.2 it's rated right now in my opinion. It's very mediocre.