
Hmm the flow is kinda getting better and so are the translations! (thank you scan group!) But the story still doesn't click, like yeah the flow is good but a random character here and there kinda throws me off.
And Vi... Is just hmm... Too naive?... I also kinda want them to grow soon, since u can't really have a solid story, based on some of the plot points, with all the characters as kids.. Imo

Uhh... I understand what is going on and everything but... What happened to the plot? This feels more like a novel summary Manga version.
This would have been so much more enjoyable if she had gone the no romance with the targets route because she saw them as cute kids since she grew up with them and found a diff love interest in HS that helped her save the prince from the coup d'etat but she basically crushed on the prince right from the getgo and is all over the place despite her mental age

WOW This one looks good!!
There is a direct conflict with the gods, game masters. Him returning to the beginning wasn't dramatic but it carries weight, like the returner's magic one because he is the sole survivor till the very end.
Still, it's kinda ironic how he is trying to stay on the down low but still caught the attention of the Korea GM because of his low key OP lol

Ch 20
The art is okay but there is No real story and the guy talks to himself outloud too much.
I don't mind stories similar to solo leveling but... There is no back story and he went from. Weak to knowing how to wield a sword and become strong from one dungeon. There is to much suspension /dramatic scenes.
The flow is just kinda bad compared to other gaming stories (not just solo leveling)
If it took 20 ch to just get to some of the main plot then it'll take quite a while for there to be a substantial story
She has completely tamed the beast
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She has even restrained his desires and he doesn't hate it lol
... But she very clearly served her brother to the beast, can call it karma tho XD