
First my favorite store by far is the one about the twins. I adore that story. Two people fall madly in love the moment they touch and lay eyes on each other. God it's so good I wish it were longer!
Now on to the reason for my title!
WHY DIDN'T THE UKE IN THE FIRST STORY TELL THE SEME WHAT HAPPENED?!
Where the hell did he get the idea that the seme fired him, just tell him that his brother tossed him! I'd rather that brat get yelled at instead of what actually happened!
I mean where does he get off saying anything to the uke when he didn't even call to see if his own brother was still alive?! Would have loved to have his friend show up and make the ending amazing!

I have to say that chapter 3 and 4 are the same thing. And I really didn't like that one. The uke did like the seme but the seme was a jerk. I would have liked it if the uke didn't believe the seme and make the seme work to get the uke to believe him. Just giving in is wrong, your just giving a selfish person what they want and your getting nothing.
That last part with the chibi's was so adorable!