Y'know I didn't like her party dress this time. Especially around the chest area, it looks a little to boxy (〜￣△￣)〜 . I did like this chapter though very cute can't wait for the confrontation with her parents!
Girl you can't keep kissing him and then say you just want to be friends you're sending out mixed signals (￣∇￣")
On another note their relationship is developing quite nicely. However, I'm worried she has secret magic powers or something that's making the prince want her. And she'll be forced to marry the duke to get away from him because that might mess up their whole dynamic since she only likes him right now she isn't necessarily in love with him.
I repeat the chapter was cut because the uploader was worried about possibly being sued. I’ll dm you where the rest is if you ask!
1. The Duke's an idiot for thinking she's involved because all he would have to do is check if she's a mage since the kid was kidnapped by a mage.
2. The Duke's an idiot + a jackass ten times over for not just asking the child what happened and not believing anything he said.
3. Duke is still a fucking idiot for making her take care of his kid when he's still under the impression she's somehow mind controlling him.
4. FL is an idiot for not just bringing the child to knights when she heard what happened. Like why is she making bread she just found out who the child's guardian is and knows he is not to be messed with. In a way she is now a kidnapper for knowing the child's guardian was looking for him and didn't immediately go to the knights to report she found him.
Moral of the story. Stupid all around I only read like 3 or 5 chapters and I could feel my brain cells dying.
I love this so much Naos's face are just the absolute best
I like it. I’m pretty intrigued by the mystery aspect I very much want to know what happened to her twin. And I like the romance it feel natural. I have a couple complaints though like the falling. I hate how much she falls like is the author aware of no other trope it’s so annoying. Also the pacing is a little messy in some areas but it’s bearable and doesn’t really affect my view of the story.
I’m excited to see where this goes!
Kim Dan that assholes is gonna keep walking all over you if you let him! Keep the energy from last week going! ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
Gonna be honest I don’t particularly like her ability. I wish it was clairvoyance the story honestly feels a little messy? stilted? idk how to describe it but there’s just something off and I think her power is what’s making it that way for me.
Also I’m still not impressed at the parents control over their children’s behavior. It’s clear the son is only following Diana’s lead and the mom just wants to wait things out after being told it’s cool in the future. But like why wait it out be a good mom and just take care of it! Fuck giving her time this isn’t a super crazy change it’s a new little sister! Her own cousin! She doesn’t have to like her but she needs to treat MC like a human being. Did she even make Diana apologize for the whole pond incident? The more I think about it the more annoyed I become.
Edit: Dropped chapter 30 I guess I'm just not vibing with the story ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Side eyeing the parents so hard rn. Like wow it’s fucked that they find out the little shit has been harassing the mc with her magic and the response is to give her a talk. Like what! Because of her direct actions MC literally almost died. I get it she’s a kid she didn’t do it on purpose (although I kinda don’t believe that because she only sent the wind magic to push her after she was on the ice) but it’s insane to me that she didn’t get grounded at the very least. I don’t care that the parents are young it’s still their responsibility to control their crazy kids. This is setting a tone for other character relationships and let me tell you I am not impressed.
Let me preface this with saying I like this. The art is great the FL is strong, pretty, and smart. And I really dig the ML's long hair. They work great together and their personalities mesh well. Overall enjoyable and funny if you don't think to much about anything.
And when I say that I mean my criticisms. First of all the side characters need some work, everyone whose not the princess are basically interchangeable with each other her ladies in waiting are random and don't have a personality, the fan girls are all the same (which may be on purpose but still it transformed Villainess #3 into meaning absolutely nothing since she's just a fan girl. Another issue for me is romance kinda slows down in the later chapters it's like after it's establish they like each other but haven't confessed yet there's no progress because she's busy with other things. Like how many businesses does she need. Dress shop, lingerie brand, ship investments, a freaking amusement park. It's fine but I'd be more interested in other things like the temple on that plot of land she got for the amusement park. Or more about the guy the original Shaye knew it's like he's disappeared. It's seems to me like the author thought he wasn't interesting enough so they just threw in Aragon instead. I also wanna know more about her art magic like is she gonna die if she keeps using it idk but I feel like she's gotten worse somehow. These are all big things but it all seems to be forgotten in the face of making her do business and walk all over people.
Another criticism I have is the yuri baiting. The yuri baiting in this is insane like 'Beware of the Villainess' levels. It's feels like the princess was made specifically for that purpose. Speaking of the princess she's hot for sure but I'm not gonna just forget how she made the ML's life a living hell because she wanted to add him to some sick collection. And apparently she's his cousin too!!! Are we supposed to pretend she's a good person because she kills rapists. When she herself sexually harassed the ML! She replaced workers in his mansion till he eventually just had to get rid of all of them, apparently is cool with the leader of his fan club, and had all the press stalk him into oblivion and make up rumors about him inciting other crazies to throw themselves at him like he's free real estate. She's EVIL and I'm not going to forget that just because she wears pants!
Let's end this with, again despite my issues with it I did have an enjoyable time reading and I expect the plot to pick up now that the OG FL has arrived.
He clearly loves his daughter but he also hurt her self esteem with those rumors. But if he loves her enough to do all of that why wouldn't he protect her from the stepmom? The way she talks to FL is atrocious it couldn't possibly be a secret. Plus the whole cloister threat! Was he gonna just let her send away his daughter because she couldn't get married over rumors that he spread????
Really just so freaking cute! I’m in love with Nonna and I love a strong willed FL who needs an ML to keep up with her and not the other way around. And even though the underlying political plot hasn’t really started I can just tell it’s going to be great.