As everyone else said super, super rushed. I felt like I was on a rollercoaster everything that happened in the like the first 6 chapters easily could've been 30. Like there's a reason you don't just speed through arcs like that, it makes the story messy. Which is exactly what this story is, MESSY! Also a story really shouldn't be leaving me with more questions than answers. For one why did she need to prove herself to the ministers it would've made more sense if they tried to put her on the throne first so they could make her a puppet and then have her kickass afterwards (would've made for a better storyline too )? Why is everyone saying "the princess has changed" just because she can use magic like her personality hasn't always been like that and what do they know about her anyway wasn't she literally locked in a palace? Why did we skip over the fact that she used to be a literal god? How did she get her magic back? Was it sealed? I'm left more confused coming out than when I went in.
My biggest complaint with this though is the catering to the asshole father! All that proving herself was basically for nothing, because a man who never gave a rats ass about her came back and took the spot she's been working towards! Maybe she didn't really care but why oh why is it seeming like she's trying to build a relationship with him! Yeah it's funny that she kinda treats him like a child but until you remember that barely anybody even remembered she existed because he locked her up, and worse he only treats her like shit because childbirth killed her mother! Which btw was stupid in WMMAP and it's still stupid here like you don't got good sorcerers to heal your wife, why'd you leave her weak enough to die. But that's besides the point it's trying to turn this into the ultimate father daughter duo op power fantasy and I'm just not feeling it! 3/10 kinda ass would be better if the father actually died.
This story has to be bad for my blood pressure. I get so freaking at every single chapter!
He really tried to poison a baby because he peed on him. Plus he pinched him hard enough to leave his skin red for slapping him. Why the hell did the other member keep him on even after he leaked shit to the media???!!! He's immature, arrogant, and has no self control! Seriously wtf!
Y'know I didn't like her party dress this time. Especially around the chest area, it looks a little to boxy (〜￣△￣)〜 . I did like this chapter though very cute can't wait for the confrontation with her parents!
Girl you can't keep kissing him and then say you just want to be friends you're sending out mixed signals (￣∇￣")
On another note their relationship is developing quite nicely. However, I'm worried she has secret magic powers or something that's making the prince want her. And she'll be forced to marry the duke to get away from him because that might mess up their whole dynamic since she only likes him right now she isn't necessarily in love with him.
I repeat the chapter was cut because the uploader was worried about possibly being sued. I’ll dm you where the rest is if you ask!
1. The Duke's an idiot for thinking she's involved because all he would have to do is check if she's a mage since the kid was kidnapped by a mage.
2. The Duke's an idiot + a jackass ten times over for not just asking the child what happened and not believing anything he said.
3. Duke is still a fucking idiot for making her take care of his kid when he's still under the impression she's somehow mind controlling him.
4. FL is an idiot for not just bringing the child to knights when she heard what happened. Like why is she making bread she just found out who the child's guardian is and knows he is not to be messed with. In a way she is now a kidnapper for knowing the child's guardian was looking for him and didn't immediately go to the knights to report she found him.
Moral of the story. Stupid all around I only read like 3 or 5 chapters and I could feel my brain cells dying.
I love this so much Naos's face are just the absolute best
I like it. I’m pretty intrigued by the mystery aspect I very much want to know what happened to her twin. And I like the romance it feel natural. I have a couple complaints though like the falling. I hate how much she falls like is the author aware of no other trope it’s so annoying. Also the pacing is a little messy in some areas but it’s bearable and doesn’t really affect my view of the story.
I’m excited to see where this goes!