
Good concept poor execution. What a disappointment. I had expectations after reading the blurb but from the beginning it was a big let down. Each chapter was rushed. Each scenario, instead of building on it to draw in the readers and draw out the intensity, was stale and boring. I read through all eight chapters and shall now go on and re-write it to showcase the passion, the vengeance, the hatred, and simmering lust that this manga had not. This is truly sad because I liked the concept the mangaka put forth.
Having sex on sand is not as fun as it looked in the manga. Sand has the darndest habit of getting in places... Uncomfortable places.
that's some real abrasion there( ̄∇ ̄")