what the fuck do you mean by "last present" YOU SHALL LIVE ETERNALLY, DON'T YOU SAY THAT EVER AGAIN >:((((
I feel like the story's boutta end but i would love if it were to focus on his powers and him learning how to control it. The journey of "the scary guy" and "the bookworm" finding out one has powers and learning how to control it throughout the story.
Anyways, this was pretty cute?
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Is this worth the read?
Honestly, I don't get the point of all of this.
? is the story like.. confusing orrrrr
I just don't get the general flow. Plus the MC is annoying. Like pervious commenters her reaction is always shocked. :O literally every frame her face is like that.
I guess the big spoiler below explained everything but nah, I don't like it still.
guess it isn't worth the read then, ty
Penny the Unicorn will be so happy, there's a story including Alicorns! (basically unicorns, but with wings)
Penny's gonna make some pie now