
I mean, he doesn't even have to tell the seme about the evil father (that he knows is evil but because the author is lazy and don't wanna have to think hard to make a plot that makes sense she'll just make him trust him anyways), if he could just ask the seme about his childhood, about the experiments, about anything and everything things would just be more realistic and make more sense but since the author has less writing skills than a 14 ear old on wattpad we'll just got with the dumbest plot in the whole world! (╯°Д °)╯╧╧

the art in the last chapter it top notch wow, at least the coloring and texture and even their faces and expressions are better! It would be nice if the story too could get more concise and to the point, there's no plot and since the author is trying and old cliché at least make it go more quick and not drag something so long so that you can have 100th chapters~

Started reading this last night and this story is a great example of why I hate when authors focus on more than one couple cuz you get no development whatsoever or only one couple, usually the second, gets all the attention. The first couple was so quickly in love that there wasn't any time to even process what was happening but it was kinda 'understandable", the second couple I don't even get why they sould be together it's like zero chemistry I didn't even bother to read when they appear cuz even their sex scenes seem forced even after they say they love each other. Will be reading the next ones cuz I really need that mfkng grapist to die and Lou to be happy in his own way with Kenny and that's that. I'm not even gonna mention how the story and timeline seems kinda fucked up and without plot. The uncle and the nephew was SUPER DUPER strange too lol
right now its really the time to tell the story of the second couple? really? ugh
spoiler….
it relates to the main character don’t worry
Pleasee spoil mee
spoiler….
basically the next couple of chapters will tell us how the ‘original’ soulmate finds out that the main character was meant to be his soul mate. he finds this out from the shaman over time, maybe ~5 chapters. from the raws it looks like the main character comes crying to the ‘original’ soul mate and he seems to be happy that he came to him, so there’s going to be some sort of conflict soon. :)