
not gonna comment on the story bc everyone else has said my sentiments so im gonna talk abt the art.., or more like question it. i mean, srsly, what happened? why did the art style change all of a sudden (i think it started at the beginning of the current season?)?? why did the author decide kt was a good time to change their artstyle and definitely not for the better? the art is looking like a draft that was never polished bc it was meant to be thrown away im sorry but im just being real here. everything looks thin, point, and sharp just like the sharp turn the story took when it was hinted that poly was gonna be the ending. dang.

kinda disappointed. them switching out the drug was predictable but dominic letting go just like that? well that was a surprise but not a good one. not only that, this chapter was all over the place. the constant mood shift gave me whiplash from inserting collie into the narrative then raymon being jealous to suddenly the rising sexual tention between winter & raymon. intimate one sec then going at it like bunnies another. then we get to dominic whose behavior just came outta nowhere then back to the 2 going at it like rabbits. whuut.

so now theyre all like, "ha! here, take this! there's a reason why jaegang is a huge ahole. im gonna prove to u guys that he wasnt born that way! jinx? youre asking why it's called jinx? well, here's why! you guys want a chasing arc? well it's coming up soon! just u wait! you want there to be some wholesome development ij the plot & characters? ok, here! look at the latest chapter's last few panels! i'm just getting started!"
the smut, the art, the tension