I was hoping the comments about her seeing him and her mom fucking were metaphors or something. Nope, they were fucking indeed and she saw it indeed.
This is my first time seeing this manga. The name is Asagiiro no WHAT? The random Portuguese got me surprised.
For those who don't know, "saudade" is the Portuguese word for the emotion of missing someone or something, something similar to nostalgia but not quite.
In chapter 1, Ren's internal monologue says Matsuri is the person she had been "dying to meet", so I guess that feeling was "saudade"
I'm not in the mood for porn without plot, and this one got on my nerves with the lack of communication. If this was real life I could be more patient, but how the hell are you trapped in a game simulation but decided to hide things and actively avoid your coworker for DAYS instead of trying to figure out how to leave?
The smut is the last few chapters is good but damn... how did this man not know what was being said about his own wife, by his own servants, under his own roof, for 4 months and so loudly?
It's funny how all the comments agree he's a terrible detective. He can't even come up with a believable excuse for why he wants to get close to Ma Leo.
And why is he letting himself get spotted so easily when he's supposed to be investigating? In the first place, since he's undercover shouldn't a different detective follow Ma Leo to the hotel? Following him just everywhere ruins his cover.
I held on up to chapter 5 to see if this would be worth my time. There's just too many logic leaps in this, my suspension of disbelief can only last so long.
So the rich lady that hates her guts and her family just had to pick her out of all other women in the world, supposedly because she's easy to control (ignoring that actual surrogates exist). And not only that, but she expects the female lead to get pregnant by having raw sex with her son-in-law. She has enough influence on a hospital to kick the female lead's mother out, but can't arrange for an artificial insemination.
I can't even turn off my brain and just enjoy the smut because the sex scene is ridiculous. The female lead's proportions are absurd, she's super thin but her boobs are huge, each the size of her head. Her body is not supple, even when she's laying down her skin is not drawn like it's relaxing on the bed. Basically the artist drew a plastic sex doll.
Also we're supposed to believe the male lead is feeling horny for the first time in his entire life, because she's the one he's having sex with, even though he knows nothing about her besides the fact she accepted to get pregnant for money. Am I supposed to believe this is him falling in love?
There are other comics with similar premises and not so shitty writing.
The art is beautiful and although the premise is overused (unwanted child forced to have an arranged marriage that becomes advantageous and attracts the envy of a two-faced little sister), this one has good storytelling so far.
We got some unblurred chapters. Now I can really enjoy the toxicity of this. I've now read chapters 1 through 5.
My first impression is that this uke is such a dummy, I'm already getting secondhand embarrassment. He puts Taerim in a pedestal and makes everything about him. We're not even halfway through and I already want to tell him to stand up.
And why the hell did he hit the table with his fist while remembering his friend having a seizure though? That was so weird... Why would the author do that if not to show that he has anger issues? It feels out of character with everything else we know about him.
The premise was so interesting but in the end it doesn't look like Baba senpai genuinely fell in love with him at all, it feels like it was just convenience or he felt like he had to repay Soba-kun for saving his sister. The author tried to make us believe he really fell in love but the writing is not giving that at all.
Frankly, I think this was doomed from the moment Soba-kun revealed he came from the future. It would have been better if things happened a little more naturally. I would rather have Baba senpai be rude for a little longer in order to see a genuine change in their relationship later.
It's only the first chapter and they already had gotten married, divorced and suddenly she's getting woken up by her son because she had sex with her ex-husband. What the hell? It makes you wonder when all that happened or if it's missing frames.
The art is not nearly beautiful enough to make me stick around to see if it gets better and the other comments don't make it sound better either.
Meow boyfriend was a catch. It's not the size that matters ladies! A man that knows how to experiment and have fun with sexuality like that could even let you peg him. AND he could be a grower AND he wasn't ugly either.
The age gap is creepy but the yuri drought is too strong to skip on this so I'll just have to fool myself into thinking they're age appropriate for each other.
This is drawn like a BL. The main character only looks like a woman because BL artists make bottoms look super twinky and feminine, but the female lead looks like a BL top with long hair.
I don't usually like western ambience stuff but this and Nerd Project are an exception because... DAMN, the art is good and they're hot!
