
1. the story is SO unfair to jamil
2. its a "throuple", but only jan and pray had the most "screen tim in the other half"
3. the story is just, either too fast (first few chs.) then becoming too much of the same as tge previous chs. then just becoming bland and boring.
4. the art style is a definite a+ for me, the story is just a let down.
5. justice for jamil as the first lover. grr
-100 heaven points fir me i guess