i need to go to the church and confess my sins to a priest and say, "father my bad. i think i want to beat a cocky hunk into submission and make him suck my imaginary cock then slap his ass hard until the stick breaks, leaving scars on his smooth and prisitine booty."
i can't draw for shit but i just noticed how the facial expressions feel like they don't really express much. idk though. maybe it's because the art is too pretty. i love this story tho.
yeah i dont wanna talk bad about other people's art since i draw myself but this could use more eyebrow expressions? eyes are hard to adjust but you it can change drastically with proper eyebrow game i think
for example, she’s supposed to look shocked with a open mouth, but she just looks weird. her eyes and eyebrows are the same, so the face expression comes off odd ash
for example, she’s supposed to look shocked with a open mouth, but she just looks weird. her eyes and eyebrows are the same, so the face expression comes off odd ash risa kim
Same the shock expression is a bit awkward.
Why does she have to open her mouth that wide everytime she is in shock. lol.
I love the art and story, but in the later chapters I've gotten a bit annoyed over those gaping mouths when they talk or are stunned. Something is just off with those 'expressions', lol.
Lmao I always pay attention to the magnificent objects they draw, like backgrounds and stuff and when I noticed that pastries hahahaha I am thinking it's probably intentional
i mean this is kind of wrong but it's hot but it's still wrong BUT IT'S HOT