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The premise COULD have been interesting and fun. BUT. Huge fucking but...
Our seme, disregards everything the uke says and muscles in, there are zero boundaries and no this is not rape he does consent but the uke was also kind of cornered.
There is literally no character development, NONE. Zilch. These characters are flatter than my ass. I don't understand the motivation either of them has. There was zero chemistry.
I got so bored in the middle and remembered I have legit dropped reading this 3 times in the past due to this.
Nothing happens. He pays for sex, they have sex, they go to uni. Rinse and repeat.
THE BOSS IS ACTUAL SCUM GIVING OUT PERSONAL DETAILS AND SIGNING CONTRACTS WITHOUT THOSE INVOLVED PRESENT. Talk about bad touch.
ALSO they dropped this huge bomb of how fated pairs get each others names on them, like why was this plot device not in the first 3 chapters of the story? (it was mentioned in passing I believe?) Did they suddenly decide this would be cool and explain why they absolutely HAVE to be together. Even though the seme and the omega have more chemistry?
It was too short and rushed. Would have been better if they'd just focused on the paying for sex and made it insanely smutty. The sex scenes are nothing to shout about either though.
There are much better mangas/webtoons that have a similar premise which do a MUCH better job. Even though they aren't omegaverse.
The arts ok and I like that fated pairs weren't just OxA.
Think I could legit right a dissertation on how bad this one is.
Anyway, go read something worthy of your time, I beg you.
Liked the idea but jesus christ the pacing is awful. I didn't bother finishing it as it bored me to death in the middle. The first 10/20 chapters were alright and then its just a slog to get to the next interesting part. Which I didn't find even tho I got to page 45... If you've got nothing better to read though and you need something mindless, have at it.
Exactly my thoughts the story was very promising but the characters bored the hell outta me.
Legit been reading BL for the last 3 months and found this absolute gold out of nowhere. I enjoyed this more than Jujustu Kaisen. So fucking cool and the characters are great!
Were the shoulders always so wide? I found it so distracting this chapter
He got a pea head on the hulks body its kinda absurd
I really enjoyed this read, the drama was always shocking but still felt natural, didn't drag on unnecessarily. Will enjoy re-reading this soon.
Hope
Oh I mistakenly reply here
This was super good, not for the faint of heart, but I've read dirt on here which has a higher rating, the art is awesome and the plot is unique. What more do you want?
I have abandoned this due to all of the cringey things and second hand embarassement. I can't. I might vomit.
Oh and I only got to chapt 6...