I enjoyed the story, it was cute. But come on, I can’t with how they drew her hair (she reminds me of the 70s or 80s female workout video hairdos).
Also, the other chicks in this story looked good but they went ahead and gave the fl massive eyes and made her look childish I guess
Lmao I have never seen someone with a bed that big, the pillows are massive too, like the fl could fit into the pillow case, the story is so bad, I start noticing all these other things at this point.
Either way I will continue to read just to finish the story, otherwise I will always have a thought saying it might get better.
I can’t with the amount of coincidences lmao (the mother saving him as a baby, her saving him when they were teens). I actually like it for some reason, probably cause the grandpa in the one scene where he is staring at them then the next, his hands are up waiting for a hug.
“Yes, yes, I know,” She mumbled half to herself and sighed.
She quickly fumbled with the belt and buttons of his trousers. The damn things didn’t want to come off and she could hear Bjorn chuckling to himself, laughing at her inexperience. That only spurred Erna on and before he knew it, he was exposed and her thighs were wrapped around him again, pulling him in close.
“Erna, seriously, what are you doing?”
Embarrassed by the unintentional situation, Erna applied all her training before Bjorn could stop her. Shy at first, but step by step, with sincere, ladylike repose, she worked his hardened penis like it was a lollipop she had gotten at the festival.
Bjorn’s head went back and he let out a gasping moan. He tugged at Erna’s brown hair and his eyes were wide with the pleasure of her teasing.
The day when he had to calm a his hysterical wife after their first time was gone, now there was just this greed for the pleasure. He had done his best to control himself, out of respect for Buford, her birth place. That’s what the feeling had been all along. This place, where little Erna had been playing house, making daisy chains and other such childish games.
Erna noticed Bjorn’s furrowed brow and wondered if she had hurt him accidentally, he was thicker in her mouth than she expected.
“Are you hurt?” she asked, amidst shallow breaths of pleasure.
“No,” Bjorn replied, swallowing his saliva, he was salivating like a wild animal.
Erna went back to sucking on the tip of Bjorn and the surprised gasps from his urged her to try and take more. It was strange, his moans made her smile grow wide.
“Erna…stop it,” Bjorn whispers, but Erna was unrelenting.
This is chapter 95 in the novel so y’all know where to read from
Hii can you please drop the link of the novel, idk where to read it
Does the fl ever leave the ml? Like I just want him to notice and want her, not just physically. Like I want a real fight, where he notices he hurt her and this a redemption arc for him starts. My head hurts, I’m just gonna read the novel at this point.
Trust me, he's gon regret a lot of things
Yeah I finished the novel a few hours ago, haven’t read the side story yet tho
can u spoil me please?
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She falls pregnant
Ml goes to buy gifts for the baby and fl
Fl has a miscarriage
Ml burns all the gifts and acts like nothing happened
(Idk when it’s revealed but the mls first wife baby daddy gets revealed)
Fl runs away in the middle of the night and leave a note
Ml thinks she just wants him to chase her so he doesn’t go
Ml gets drunk and goes to her, she tells him to leave, she asks for a divorce
He goes back home and realises he loves her so he starts visiting her and staying with at hers cause they still married
He buys her gifts, she lashes out about him buying her gifts and how it affected her when he did that previously
They talk about the miscarriage
He goes back home
His nanny or grandma sends a letter that his grandma is about to die so she takes a train back, there’s a train accident, he goes looking for her, she’s safe, they hug and get back together lmao (sorry it’s long)
Thank you so much!! You’re da best!! <33
Maybe a spoiler idk.
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I remember seeing a picture of them with two kids, anyone know how long we gotta wait till the romance starts?
Oh boy .. who's gonna tell
You be the one and say it
tell meeeee
I'm begging to know plzzz
yea it’s a novel cover if you search up the story i believe
Is that how Hitler was born ?
In the following episodes, Mc will be caught and will be raped and tortured by a Ml for a long time son that's leaves romance quite in the late chapters
Omg that's so sad
God dammit fk this dude man I was at least hoping she outsmart him
Well she did outsmart him and escaped but fallin in his hands again :<
UGH Ur profile pic expresses my emotions right now :( I don't think I can continue when there is no justice GOD is DEAD ty
Ahhhh they are so pretty (is it weird to call a dude pretty) / handsome. The dad is 100% my type ahaha although I’m mainly a dark hair ml typa chick.
Im actually loving this, plus when she said ‘wake up and face reality’ (idk if those were the exact words but) it just reminded me of ‘wake up to reality’ speech from Madara lmao.
I was always thinking it was weird that the uke didn’t remember what happened or if the seme was mistaken maybe. (Read to quick so don’t remember any names)
Like when seme was with the older and the dude choked him I thought he would get a flashback remembering it wasn’t the uke that assaulted him.
I also realised every time the uke would put his hands on the seme (whilst angry) it would always be on his clothes near his neck but never directly choking him.
And the older dude choked him twice so idk, someone tell me I’m not the only one who noticed this.
Dude same the uke raping the same in the earlier chaps is so ambiguous like the uke’s side of thoughts were never shown here right? Like I kept thinking y? Was it not real? His continued silence on the topic is frustrating. TBH I don’t see any romance here they both simply rapists
The bottom said early on that he doesn’t remember much of that night. He was wasted and retained absolutely nothing of that night. It’s hard to get a perspective from a party that didn’t even know that night ever happened until he was told it did. The bottom is aware that it happened because of what the top told him, and he knows it’s absolutely fucked up of him to not remember, and that such a thing shouldn’t be forgiven.
The bottom not remembering was pivotal to the plot.
Ohh.. ok so him not remembering adds to how much of a terrible person he is
Yeah basically lol
RUINING THE MOOD??? DRIVING ME CRAZY...
lmao when I read this line I died, yes, don't bring personal matters into the workplace
“Yes, and I lick like one too”
Oh my…. Ahahhaa I can’t!!! This man got me blushing wtf