
Omg the ml sucks ass. Our fl needs to stop and actually think about who she keeps on holding on to. Ok you like him, go confess to him. Ok it may take some time, do your best girl. BUT WTF DO YOU MEAN IT TOOK HIM 101, I REPEAT 101 CONFESSION TO BE LIKE "i-i-i-i like h-her!!"
The fl isnt pathetic but really foolish, I get that you have your feelings girl, being rejected by the love of your life sucks but that dont mean you keep holding on to every bits and pieces of them. She keeps telling her self, " im over him" yet goes back to looking and blushing at him, And getting scared of every convo w him.
I dont see a hit of personality except his trauma, like mf is good at sword fighting, wow what a dashing man.
Why cant every girl jst be friends? Man they jst little kids yet they jst gotta come at eachother. Yea there should be a plot but im so tired of girls hating on girls.
A lot of these stories force MCs to be an accidental pick me because they end up talking to male love interest(s) and men in their family only because they use the women to stir up drama. If there's a sister I know they'll never get along and the author will villainize the other girl so the mc can't get along >:( I'm sick of the pick me vibes being forced on any of the girls, extras included!