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This story would only be good if it became longer and the bottoms killed all of the tops

I highly recommend all of y'all read the novel it's one of the best I've ever read and I can't wait to see what happens in the future

Idk why but this is so bisexual gaze if that makes sense

The only good straight smut ive found on here tbh

Yall are acting like he legit forced him, if lyle felt like he was really in danger or actually scared to do it he would have firmly said no, and if he wasnt ok with telling him in the moment he wouldnt have, yall are acting like lyle is some kind of kitten with no life experience, that is a grown man jesus fuck

It's just funny how wrong this all is, the anatomy, the lack of facial expressions, the lack of a good story, this author is an all rounder when it comes to being a fuck up, jumping around and cheering that this is something I didn't pay for

I lovehow we are all hung up on how cringe the rock my world part was lmao

I love how at peace they feel in eachothers space I can Tell that the sun spilling in through the padeo doors is warmer when they are together fr

I almost shat my pants in terror for a sec but im all good now, im happy they didnt actually fuck in this chapter to let the tension build a bit more,

Ok the story was alright but there are more things annoying with this than not, like how… (SPOILERS AHEAD!!!)















Bro was totally fine with him fucking his half brother “for his sake” without even bringing it up afterwards to talk and explain the situation in detail, alongside the fact the the author has no real idea how gay sex works, and when you think they have finally caught on its shown again in detail how out of the loop they are, the sex is bland to the point of just wanting to scroll past it, and when you do stay for the sex scenes you can tell through the screen how unbelievably LOUD the uke is like