
I love how she is, seeing the same female type of characters over and over again is boring so seeing a more softer girl is a breathe of fresh air. Not all women are built the same, some women prefer to be softer. Not everyone wants hyper masculine traits like they give female characters in stories like these. Y’all are so fake woke, women come in different shapes, sizes, and personalities. I prefer seeing this type of character then a character that has to argue with someone every 5 minutes.

Truthfully i love the fl but it was a very poor choice to let her go on the mission. She could have fucked it up even more. Hell if Zion didn’t put a tracking device on her she would have sold to an abusive person even worse she could have died.
Honestly if they’re gonna blame anyone they should blame Zion. He shouldn’t have allowed her to go on such a dangerous mission. Because she is young and childish she did the complete opposite of what she was told. Zion should have trained her a little like hiring someone to teach her self defense or strictly teaching her the dos and don’ts when they’re on a mission. Hell at least teach her simple cleaning/cooking. Idk why he thought allowing a child to go on an important/dangerous mission was a good idea.

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FL Lead cuts her wrist near the end and walks into the ocean with her baby killing herself and the baby.
Whole story fucking sucks and extremely sad, ML will have you burning with hate and so will her “friend”. Save yourself the time and find something better to read. Too many options on this site to end up reading this trash.

Ok, first I want to start off saying he’s not dead. It makes no sense for him to be dead when we’re literally only on chapter 34. They didn’t even find his body. 2nd if he truly is dead which once again is not likely then I think that’s a interesting twist in the story. Killing off the ML so early into the story? That’s not something we see very often and it’d be interesting to see how the author continues the story without the ML. Honestly I’m not sure what’s happening in this story at this point so I’m gonna re-read it and hope that it makes sense again.

Her mentioning how tiny she is every 5 minutes and how everyone around her does the same thing is low key kinda annoying, and I’m not saying this as a “oh if you’re small don’t talk about it” thing I’m saying damn how many times are you gonna mention you’re smaller than everyone else? Is that all that’s interesting about you? She’s cute tho so I forgave it and kept reading but this isn’t really very interesting so I’ll have to drop it! Like I said she’s adorable tho so.. yeah that’s about it.

This was so RUSHED. I didn’t know what the fuck was going on, some parts of this seem like pages were missing because the conversations just skipped around. It was like gaps in pages and in conversations. One moment they’re asking the other about something then the next thing you know were talking about something else without even getting an answer. Conflict felt like it lasted 3 seconds then boom it was solved! This felt so rushed and all over the place at times that I had to go back and re-read pages to make sure I’m understanding what’s happening on the next page. Though this was all over the fucking place, it was cute and the FL was pretty and the ML was cute.
Y’all noticed that his earring were disappearing and reappearing?
I mean magic am I right?