
feels kinda rushed. there’s so much potential to explore the characters feelings. I wanted to see more of sion agonizing about starting to want to protect laila. I kept reading further then suddenly they became teens. and i get that sion doesn’t talk much but the writer could at least spare more lines of them blocking the thoughts of feeling comfy instead of fear/guilt. sion almost had the thought of “is she a regressor too?’” but the author did not further this potential.
the next chance that they missed is when sion returned as an adult. How better would it have been for all the beautiful the scenery for the MC to have a bit of a flashback seeing the adult sion again for the first time. If the author wants to, they could still have him reach out ot her and pull her back to reality. and continue to the existing scenes. I agree with the comments that they are downplaying Laila’s side. Sion also could use a bit of a flashback for an extra guilt

wait that’s so sudden. i was just writing my review, what chap i last read and what i want to expect in the future chaps as i let this marinate. after writing my review, i found out in the comments that that was the end???
jae’s parents being kinda homophobic was uncalled for. and what about jae’s grandfather??? and as the other commenter said, that ceo guy who previously owned the necklace?

i think it’s because smuts catered to fem gaze is so rare that we are expressing our wants in the comments. i like that we are begging for more in hopes that it’ll guide those interested in making contents for us.
as much as I am happy that taeha stopped. i felt like this scene can be improved on. (WE WANT BLUSHING ML). idk about you but i was struggling on guessing who is saying which line.
i know we can’t have it all but as much as I love the curves on the MCs body, it gets thrown off by the proportions. the her head is just his upper bicep (or whatever that’s called).
the taeha pov looking at her body is really so good. i can feel her squishy flesh so much i want ML to touch it. tbh idk what was happening. he seemed to stay still but there were action marks it felt like she was shaking internally. he also seemed to shift a bit before conversing with her. and as much as we glorified him for stopping, she also didn’t mention to continue…
the plot it self is actually interesting. (i love it when they are both regressor it doesn’t feel like “raising your husband/wife” trope) season 1 was executed well. i like that they showed both characters POV as it laid a potential ground work for romance.
However, that was all there is to it. It personally became meh. I might still continue reading just to see how it goes. I understand if people continues to enjoy it and those who drops this. Storytelling wise, it’s undeniable that the author missed the opportunity to explore more of how the characters unlearn their trauma/guilt. The many recent chaptes glossed this over and just went straight to romance. I’m not into slowburns but I’m not into rushed either for which this story is heading