before some annoying person says "why are you here go back to cute romance or your doing too much blah blah motherucking blah"
I low-key was invested until they started having her raped every single updation. Like what the hell happened to the plot of her past self obviously leaving the duke for someone she loved more (idk who) and her comming back to repeat that same cycle with possible no escape.
this is my own fucking critique and I hate people who think others can't complain about something they are genuinely upset about. You people are corny as hell.
IM A STARVING JUST LIKE OLIVER TWIST. "Please sir I want some more" I SCREAM TO MY IMAGINARY AUDIENCE AS I CLUTCH MY PRARL AND SLAM MYSELF AGSIN THE WALL TO EXPERIENCE THE HIGH THIS CHPATER JUST GSVE MR. FUCKING HELL.
Joshua ill be your mistress my legs are spread wide open ready to recieve you. if you dont like that I got the dragon strap just for YOU GAWDDD.
I'm normal now
PLEASE FOR YHE LOVE OF GOD, YOU ARR INFRONT OF YOUR EX WIFE DO NOT EMBARRASS YOURSELF MORE.
I'm on like chapter 14 and I don't know how the ML hasn't punched the dude straight in his dumbass face. You catfish a mf then expect everything to be normal. Are you mentally ill??? THE STRAIGHT AUDACITY OF THE MC ID BEYOND ME????
and the MC's friend can choke on my nans hairy balls. I hope he coughs up pubic hair balls every single day for the rest of his life.
Bring me both of he men now and I'll test both their dick curves. even if I ain't curve at the right degree I gotta see it through my brother. I GOSTA SEE IT THROUGH
I don't blame him for thinking Josh and his sister are dating. We gotta remember guys, chase has never been in a monogamous romantic relationship that's lasted longer then I would on American borders.Plus people like to date those who look like them ( I don't know why but its bloody weird). He's insecure and I don't blame him if I was anywhere near Joshua I was pounce on him like a starving wolf. Anywhoo Joshua my legs are spread open for you.
at some point you start understanding why superheros don't take revenge on villains "because they'll turn out just like them or worse" and this is a prime example of that.
I know the MC raped him in the past and ML wanted to dish out what' he received but this is just unnecessary... How about you put him in mother fucking jail?? Hes actively getting enjoyment for this and I don't know whether he's already gone off the deep end or if he's edging there every single second his with MC. This ain't fucking revenge anymore (I hate this stupid bitch ass creator. suck my balls) it's an excuse to portray the creators concerning rape kink that's in both of her most popular works.
came back for the translators notes. jesus Christ theyre cracking me up years later. anyways fuck this nasty story.
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Mayn this sum bullshit. Anywho this story had potential can the MC just take his dick out and start tickling it and realising it's her husband please for the love of God. She might be stupider then me because as soon as I realised he was giving me favouritism while screaming I should abandon my husband I would have known immediately.anyways he's sexy as hell I'll be so honest LIKE GOD HES SEXY im going to sidetrack about how I wanna fuck that man if I keep speaking.
I need heart and head to get together idk I think it would save the economy or smth. Dick and MC can live out their lustful days of degeneracy. Actually I don't hate dick enough to leave him with that vermin but we all know MC isn't ending alone....
I've been waiting panting like a dog In heat for the moment they bang. just for this.. I'm disappointed y'all I can't believe I'm gonna say this rn. But i prefer the plot of an OMEGAVERSE manhwa over the porn and you know what that makes me like this story more. GET IN MY FAVOURITES NOW
Before Henry died he very much loved Viktor as shown with the heart but he started to realise that Viktors infatuation with him had to substance. He was only interested in his looks and his abilities in bed. The head which I think is supposed to be Henrys common sense decided to go have other partners sexually because he wanted to understand why he loved Viktor so much even though he knew it was only physical attraction. His heart realised it wasn't working but his brain was trying to get him to think about how batshit insane Viktor is.
So I think if Henry gets reconstructed his heart will realise that what Viktor loves about him was never who he truly was as a person without his looks and he'll stop loving him.
I was turning my brain off the entire time I was reading this and then I read "22years older' and my mind starts processing all the issues of the world and the ending of pluto or smth. but like DAYUM 22????? idk me personally I would consider him a baby if I was the old grey hair blind human thingy (I forgot his name y'all) but I mean like get railed idk..m