
I mean at least he asked and was given consent the second time ╮(╯▽╰)╭ And ig at least he didn’t “force” the uke during the first time??? At least it wasn’t one of those where the uke is literally begging the seme to stop and the seme says smth abt being full of desire and it being the uke’s fault? Soxjsksi Idk the way they did it made it seem like it wasn’t/that/ even tho it was probably /that/.
Anyway aside from that, the seme is actually rly nice and HA GET REKT to the pple bullying uke. That was rly sweet of the seme TwT

Aw man that actually had a really good premise and had so much potential. Although the storytelling needs a lot improvement, I still found it to be a fairly good read. I think it’s even kind of cute. I feel it would have been better if the story was a long one and showed the progress of high schooler Maki and high schooler Neo. It would also have been cute if the story revolved more arnd him trying to change the future rather than mull over the past bc then we’d get the opportunity to see young Neo slowly falling for Maki while adult Neo keeps trying to “knock some sense” into him. It has major potential and I would rly like to find a manga or webtoon with a similar premise
Tbh I think rather than the story gg from “not lovers to lovers” it’s like “not lovers to them realizing they wanna be lovers”. Like the ending is just the beginning of them starting a relationship if that makes sense? They’re not rly officially tgt /yet/... just fbuddies with smth more. I don’t think it’s a bad story, just not the story everyone is expecting (not lovers to lovers)