
I didn't like it at all ! Had a hard time finishing (the french didn't bother me since it's my native) the story didn't make sense why was he gonna kill his brother if he liked him too? He even said he let him hold him? And why did the brother give up just because of a kiss? This has to be the dumbest reason ever! And it is so rushed.. the whole thing didn't make sense! (╬ ̄皿 ̄)

Actually this isn't weird at all. Choking is a very commun actually, and thousands of people die from doing it to themselves every year. People call it the "choking game" and many enjoy the feeling of being choked (they either do it to themselves or have other people do it for them). However, it's extremely dangerous.
Anyways , nice story, I'm just sad not see how the feelings developed. O felt as if the seme was taking pity on the uke.
Lovely art ! I've a feeling I'm gonna enjoy this *_*