Aw. This is so cute...and so painful at the same time. I hope it ends well.
I love the chibi credits too. Heh. ♡
Here's 2cents from an old lady:
Let's start w the second story. Short, sweet and cute. Enough to contrast the 1st one. But, since it's a one shot, i didn't really expect more. It's already fine for a one shot. I am not complaining.
First story could've been stretched more. You see, we have a complicated character here, so there are loose ends untied. I get why he's behaving that way, years of trauma (and probably trust issues) won't go away like poof. Like everyone is saying, this kid needs therapy, but i have never seen that in a yaoi manga, rather...this trauma(s) were used as nuisances. Can't think of a proper word, hmm..hurdles? You get it, right?
Anyhoo...it could've been good if its longer because it has the potential to become better.
Traumas are used as simplistic plot devices I think is what you're getting at when they're way more complex
More like that. It's a very common thing in yaoi, right? It attempts to gain sympathy from the readers, of course, but It becomes gold if portrayed/written properly.
I mean...better break up than make it worst, right? I feel bad tho, i feel like christian#2 started to genuinely fall for elliot. It's so complicated my head aches.
Gosh what's wrong with meΣ( ￣□￣||) I read Elliot as idiot(￣∇￣")
This is better than other long winded manga/webtoons with a rating higher than 9. It could've been longer, they have a material for it to stretch it further than 5chapters. With that, the pacing isn't bad. The relationship doesn't feel forced nor rushed. And the smut scenes are good too.
PS. What the F is a vertical anus? Do i google it?
Thank you!!! There are a bunch of trashy yaoi that’s filled with rape and stupid plots yet still has a rating above 9. I find short yaoi like this more genuine
Don't get me wrong, i want them to end up happy but i want Mu to play the chase more. I mean, he deserved it for what he did. *imagine yourself in Mu's shoes* will you easily forgive someone who catfished you? He was creepy as hell too. Thank god he's hot, right?
The catfish is one thing but the fact that he contributed to the bullying at first lol
Oh, most importantly that too.
I just know i have to read this. I know it's too early to say if it's goos but i've like everthing this author has done so this must be good too
Heemin?! That pretty and mellow guy with yoonseul??!
Oh, so this is his "8-yr relationship" huh. He's so chaotic here lol. A huge contrast XD short but sweet.♡
Does the brother have a manhwa of his
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Not that i know of. I wish he has...