I actually dropped this and don't plan to read it again I just came back to see how the story was going and the only thing I'm gonna say is that ...hwi has bigger titties then I would ever have ngl
So cuteee! Anyways just a reminder, that you are still single
Haha then shall we date?
Then we shall (づ￣ ³￣)づ
so its how it works
This is gonna take a big turn I tell you and you ain’t gonna be ready for it ┗( T﹏T )┛
Oh no..... What the hell happens?! Spoil me please ╥﹏╥
A s*icide bc of that mf dojin
Ohhhhhhhhh........ There's got to be a twist there somewhere. Maybe he turns into an entity that can manifest somehow and they live happy together forever? (￣∇￣") here's me being hopeful (●'◡'●)ﾉ
Ok we are introduced with this characters Yoo chung, Sha ru rong
In the first 20 chapters their is no story no chemistry nada.zero. It just I’ll do anything, even, fuck for a guy I just met for my brother and probably bc his hot.
Chapters 1-10
1. Yoo Chung Having a wet dream over man he jsut met that offered him a business card for Korea dancing school like who does that isn’t that just wrong?
2. And then Sha hu rong made an assistant work for him to move into a motel bc he likes yoo chung...Ask yourself doesn’t that seem wrong and tell me it is. Because if you don’t then are you ok like how doesn’t that seem wrong?
3. And after Yoo chung calling a men he jsut met ,who came to where he worked bc he liked him, and called him considerate. If a man I just met showed up the where I worked and told me he came here bc he liked me I wouldn’t call him considerate I would’ve called the police.
4. Yoo chung having sex with a men he jsut met and only saw him 2 times...who in the right mind does that
5. Yoo chung twin brother telling him to get closer to sha ru rong jsut so he can debut which is kinda mean and would probably hurt sha hu rong feelings if he found out
Chapters 11-21
1. Sha hu rong made his assistant put a drug on yoo chung to put him to sleep and I’ll tell you again just bc he liked him which is weird
2. Yoo chung woke up from the drug an didn’t question he was in another house and instead of calling for help or running away he gave sha ru rong a blowjob
3. Yoo chung doing anything for sha hu rong only bc of his brother like tf
4. Yoo chung is scared of being alone so why doesn’t he find someone instead of trying to do everything for his brother like
5. I started to understand that yoo chung probably does things for his brother probably bc him and his brother got separated in foster care? Maybe their parents died?
This makes me sick on how the author but his background on how he probably got raped or touched by someone way older then him when he was jsut a kid and if that happened in real life he probably wouldn’t want to had sex with a guy he jsut met especially so this story is kinda mess up and the author didn’t put much tought to it and same with the brother
Ima just stop at chapter 21 so the brother got what he wanted and basiclly told yoo chung just to drop sha ru completely like tf and yoo chung is thinking about doing just bc his brother got what he wanted and do y’all let it pass that sha hu rong basiclly forced him to have sex with this weird ass face and then yoo chung told him to stop many times but when he found out that the women wasn’t sha hu rong girlfriend he jsut let him do it ?? Like that’s just really wrong and very poor written
Go ahead and bash me in the comments by saying “oh then don’t read it” which I’ll gladly do, or “do you think we care about your opinion” well I don’t care about yours either. This is a very poor written story in the beginning which makes me not want to read it. Please educate yourself on what’s a good story or a poor written one
Story: 3/10
writing style: 1/10
Art: it a meh for me
pacing: it’s an eh for me
I understand your point about the story, but you gotta admit the art style is really pretty ヾ(☆▽☆)
i ain't reading all that
i'm happy for u tho
or sorry that happened
Yaoi mAgIc
In my opinion I didn’t really like it tbh but we all have different taste
This was disgusting. How do you even read this and go ahead and tell me “then don’t read it” or “does it look like I care” well I don’t care about your opinion. Your probably like does who says “love is an illusion is kinda bad” or “bl is better then yuri” or “ i only read bl for the plot” then why are you here saying good things about this.
I would rather read love is an illusion again or some shitty gl over this crap. And in the first place this says sexual assault all over. Yea ik a scub is suppose to Be like that but this is to much and then y’all enjoy this
And then in the comments saying “I found my kink” or saying “why do I keep coming back here” which is gross. Go ahead a bash me idc but if your one of those who didn’t like this and would never read it again you have my respect.
And you can tell me “well this wasn’t about boys love it a yaoi story” then why are you here it looks kinda like fetishizing gay sex bc you like this story but I’m not saying you fetishize it but I kinda weird. Disagree to agree this is my opinion
Story: 0/10
Characters: 0/10
tell 'em gab^^
Ahh their so cute and lovely making me feel lonely *cutely blocks*
MEEE I swear I’m so lonely
We will be lonely together
Now this is what you call a true S I M P...can someone get some water over here cuz sis here is thirsty and must get some water
Exactly