When i first read this I rly rly loved this. But now rereading it im seeing all the problems lmao. Its still a rly good story tho and one of the better conestiual non toxic yaois. Def recommend
1. Ryuhan is a good person- i feel like his character was exagerrated so teh uke wouldn't become the compelte bad guy but hoenstly this dude was a solid friend. He cared for his bestie although he did have other friends, IT was just teh uke getting jealous and possesive thats why the readers felt liek shitting on him. Since he geneiruly did care for the uke (as a friend) and was worried for him. I hapyp the uke realized that Ryuhan wasn't being a btich.
2. OMG I FUCKIN HATE TEH UKE FOR DOING THIS- the uke was treating the seme like how he felt Ryu han was treating him- Ngl seme was way to nice for putting up with this shit. That one drinking scene, dang he exlplained it in the wrost possible way to the seme. But then the seme this werid rape but not thing lmao like tf Aishh
OVerall!! GIVE IT A TRY GUYS ITS GOOD AF
What teh actual fuck did i read. I came here from tiktok seeing the hot ML but this mf ltierally rips apart some ones jaws??? Also like they're adding so many fight scenes and complicated plot shit that I am confused. Like i get it theres plot but i don't understand that it. The cigars??? He gets ambushed?? Gaprow or whatever tf?? Random phsyco dude?! Like bro what-
Also heard spoilers that the ML is toxic af and theres rape so RIPP I had high hopes but this entire manwha screams that one kid who word vomits in Egnlsih to sound profound af but makes no sense at all. The author on something when they wrote this man.
1.He is a black ops soldier in a dangerous mission, of course it will show fights + show his skills.
2. ML is very obviously the psych killer which is why he is so violent, just a preliminary of how toxic he is
3. The cigar is to give a characteristic to the ML, he is recognizable through a certain smell, it’s rare and luxurious.
The plot makes sense lol, it’s a mafia story. There’s always multiple names and multiple type of scenes. If you’re not use to that it’s okay, most of the time I pretend like I know what’s going on, yet they’re my favorite type of story
Im sick of the "ordinary but not like the other girls" MC, like istg if i see another plain brown haired brown eyed mc like this smh there like 50 diff ver of him in the BL multi-verse.
Yes, it’s all very boring. Why they don’t get that interesting people are interesting, I will never know ╮(￣▽￣)╭
It's because there's a lot of pretty ukes now so they probably want to make it unique one lol he's cute tho
i mean he is secretly a guide and doesn't even know it, so it is understandable that he is "different" from other civilians. He is a cutie tho so the plain boringness gets a pass from me
he's a so basic doe. Like I enjoy the secret OP mc trope but he's acting like every other brown haired cinnamon role uke. + there sin't rly anything intresting about his personality even if he was basic
Yupp. He is super boring. The only thing interesting about him is the ML’s interest in him and that got nothing to do with HIM. Poor MC, being so useless to readers
What do you expect him to act then?? Bro it's literally the author's choice our opinion is useless here
The readers opinion is ALWAYS important. That’s why reviews exists.
Bro what I mean is it's the author's choice what's the use of complaining?? And yes readers opinion is always important but don't bring it to the character, you can complain about what's goin on with the story but you can't criticize the charactersjust because they're plain, it's completely necessary.
You all probably just used seeing all pretty ukes that's why their appearance is all it matters to you
the entire point of the review was that he was boring not that he wasn't hot?!? Also why can't we not complain? Thats the entire point of reviews- so readers can give their opinions. The plot and characters are both parts of the story and both relevant. So if something isnt' to our liking we are totally within our rights to complain??? Its my opinion if i find him boring, plain, or stupid. If you don't like this review just down vote it and mov e on
What are you talkin abt I didn't include him being hot here, and I said yes, readers opinion are important but isn't it necessary to complain that the character's boring?? Like what do you expect then?? It's part of the author's choices and if you want to complain abt something like that you should've go to the main app/sites where the author can see this complains of yours. You guys expect something more then find some more interesting bls you can read where the ukes are not that boring for you.
If the characters are bad ofc you'll literally hate them but bro being boring??? Bro how is he even boring?? Just because he looks plain??
Your reasonings is childish whatever
Exactly! That you can critic characters or storyline is the most stupid thing I’ve ever heard.
You literally commented about pretty ukes and appreances thats why i said our main problem lay with him being boring not plain. Lol why must the author need to see my compliants?? Maybe i want to share my complaints with the mangago community and have some other people with me to bitch about it? Yes I expected more, and yes I will go find more intresting BL's but doesn't mean I can't complain?!
And your reasoning doesn't make sense. By that logic, if you don't like a comment you should just go comment on something you would like smh
And I find him boring. There are numerous other commentings saying the same thing aswell. Boring is subjective maybe you don't agree with it but there many others who do. I can basically say the same question back at you. How is he even interesting?? Just because you find him cute??
I see I wrote can instead of can’t. I was agreeing with you
Damn these clumsy fumble thumbs!
oh omg sry lol! I meant to reply to the other person lmao but they stopped replies and I replied to u accidently
At least we’re not boring
frr bro like cmon the MC is bland af, ive seen 50 diff manwhas with the exact same brown haired puppy personality. The fact that he lets the ML push him around and his got that white lotus aura makes him less like-able. Theres literally nothing that stands out about him other than his seceret powers. Like he isn't even cute. It gets boring move on its not that deep smh.
Yup. It’s like the author only had energy to make one interesting character.
Whenever I see smth with espers and guides ik its gonna be BL. A damn Pikachu mommy can get it
SSS-Class trash right here lmao. Its beauty and beasts copy pasted. Ngl it was ok at first but the reverse harem was mid and the girl was so annoying. Imagine a 2012 wattpad fanfic... ya thats it. she's "different" and not like all the other females lol Some weirdass furry omegaverse
Funny when you think our sense of beauty comes from what we’re used to see ; she should look ugly to most beast
i never talked about beauty in my comment lmao, i just said she was different
Idk he just pissing me off. Bro is indecisive and the story is draggin with Kim's bs like get it together man smh
it has one of those rly dramatic ao3 fic titles but its lowkey just porn with like the thinnest veils of plot
I am so fuckin confused- why is doan just letting the teal dude fuck him?! He doesn't need to- mole bitch already rejected him. Also wtf does mole bitch like him or not?! He kinda sus, why he reject him then. Anywhose justice for the Sungheon.
no.