
Wow the writing is superb, it tackled problems that some ppl suffer with
I also loved the setting for this story it felt refreshing
Especially love how the top didnt just give up, the fact that he wasnt selfish even though he had desires to do it with his lover.
It was rlly considerate of him, normally some ppl wouldve just given up saying "we're not compatible"
The fact that he willingly tried to find his erogenous zone to make it work for the both of them, so that both of them equally can feel good and get intimate. Pacing was good, the characters and the way they acted, so real.
The only thing was kinda iffy for me was in the last chapter, why'd he have to leave after things were getting good
And then proceed not to respond to him like??
I get him having the fear of things getting so good that Eric would get sick of him but bro couldve just communicated that with him damn.
But anyways, in the end they did get to clear things up so its all good i guess?
Wouldve loved an extra chapter tho, I rlly enjoyed reading it
Special shoutout to the dk redrawer, was really impressed, when redrawing is done right, this is what u get

That was a pleasant read, I thoroughly enjoyed it
Loved the fluff, the development, the characters, and their personalities.
They are just so cute and understanding of each other, liked how hiroki was so open to try new things and kept reassuring Shintaro who often overthinks things. They are so perfect for each other
Why is everyone so fixated bout the pee
Like how are yall overlooking everything??
Like how the top kept fking mc while he was unconscious, yall just went past that?
Im not defending the mc here, what he did was bad and childish of him, its kinda sad how the top actually flopped his exams coz of that.
Current top is kind of an ick for me, he was so much better during high school
Now he's kind of... Idk, ppl grow out of it i guess
I mean he did fail the exams, plus he got with diff ppl who looked like Dojin (didnt sit right with me but what can the man do? )
Right now i just feel sorry for em, the mc showing signs of liking him tho but the ml just HAD to overhear, that sucks for him
++Clearly it was cum, why are ppl blind af, pee is liquid, it wouldve just drenched his face like water, but in the panel its sticky
Plus he said "it doesn't have to be pee"
Brother just came
There shouldnt even be an argument in the first place damn yall stop talking about it
I just love how u went from "why is everyone still talking about pee" to "here are more fucked up stuff that happened" to "btw, it is cum" and then back to "but stop talking about if it is cum or piss" LMAO
No hate, just finding it funny, but ye. It is crazy how long the discussion went in the first place Lolololol
Lol I get you
Im just a lil bit acoustic GAHAHHAH (no fr, I have adhd so I talk all over the place )