
The fact that his first words was abt wanting to hear mc confess to him lmao
Got to say tho, I GAGGED when I saw the breathing cost, someone pay me to breathe too
And i find it funny how he goes on and on about "oh youre the most PERFECT, FAIREST, person I chose you and I love you regardless of everything"
But then proceeds to say
"BY RANDOM PICK" very proudly, how do you expect him to react
That was something alright
The proportions are... Yeah..
And the plot was a lil inconsistent i couldnt understand some parts but eh
It was an okay short read
(I love the premise tho, someone make bl of that but fluff pls im tired of smut, give me toe curling giggling fluff)
Honestly i’ve seen worse proportions and this author kinda makes it work. I was able to follow the plot pretty fine but it does seem this was an experimental story. I’m eating current story they’re working.