
Pretty good read, wholesome, there's communication too even though there are times they don't communicate (for valid reasons) they immediately talk about the issue when faced with each other, and apologize when they need to. very healthy interaction between the two, that takes into account both of their feelings and the effects of what their actions may have done to the other. Rating this a solid 8/10

Man they wild af doing that and almost getting caught, never mind that, ill give this a chance since this is author's first work and i dont mind but the pacing of "hiding his feelings" to straight up fucking was too fast lol, and, I wont berate any longer abt sexual preparation or protection, i know that this au is basically a fanfic since its in the comic within the story written by mc, art is good tho

Its 2 am and I am hungry
Also OMG WHAT A WASTE THIS COULD'VE BEEN SO GOOD BUT IT GOT CANCELLED
Author why'd u have to plagiarize, this manga had so much potential honestly, finding reference and information is one thing but copying panels is a huge no-no.
Sobbing because I wanted to see this progress more but it got discontinued

Second chapter order got reversed but other than that it was okay
I laughed at the author's note lol, the fact that they just mashed up all their kinks and called it a day XD
(I kinda found it funny how the other evil spirit was so shocked he passed over to the other side coz he couldnt get some of that )

Idk i still cant bring myself to like the second story, the daydreaming bit threw me off I was hating it so much until i read that it was just his imagination, but the drunk scene i thought it was a daydream but he actually went and kissed him I don kno what to feel imma see how this goes, but for now im rlly conflicted
I cackled when he said
"See you tomorrow ho"
I CANT HAHAHAHAHAHHA
Also find it so cute how the baby is comforted by her dad's restless heartbeat, I love it so much