You've been doing a good job with the translation so far, but here's how you could make it better: Use the font the first translation team used. Also, have someone look over the translation and ensure there are no grammatical or spelling errors.
Thank you for your translation, I've been waiting for someone to pick it up again :)
I’m pretty sure the uploader stole it from another site lol
Why are you even deleting well-translated chapters to post your own, when the translation isn't even good?
If you're not fluent in english nor in korean why would you even consider doing that, I'd rather not have an update at all -.-
Can we finally have a scene of Daiki getting jealous or possessive? ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶ pwease