
From a storytelling standpoint, I think YTMIDI is very convoluted and messy. It could use some work, as the plot and overall story line is kinda hidden and unclear. Like it’s clear the MC (whose name I don’t know) is trying to pay off debts or whatever, but why is this guy always there? Why is there such a sudden shift in feelings (MC just automatically liking him)? What even was the first couple chapters? They were really hard to understand and get through. Also, the amount of times he’s offered money is very confusing. It’s just too many numbers in such a short amount of time, being thrown at this “no name” and it’s strange to me. That being said, the art is gorgeous and the character appearances are easy to distinguish between each other (occasionally that can be something other mangas struggle with). Overall, I think it’s fine, I wouldnt recommend it, but I wouldn’t discourage you from reading it. All of my criticism is in good faith, it’s just something I’ve noticed.
I don’t want to like the seme nonononono he had no not like this please no....too late -s-