I feel like at this point she should have figured out that the warden likes her, it's becoming pretty obvious ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
I didn't read this on purpose so I could binge it, but joke's on me 63 chapters of barely any development and no smut... #－.－)(╯°Д °)╯╧╧
Because this is a well-written and detailed Boy's love that doesn't focus on sex but characters, and doesn't feteshize and promote soft gay pornography
"barely any development" sucks that you don't know what a good story is even if it say on your lap and did a lapdance...
Like the other common on top this is a well written one, if you just want smart then just go look for other story because this one is none or maybe later and didn't you know that this one is not smart. Also "barely any development" are you joking
They really had to make Ray fu**ed up too so we could accept them being together... (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
LMAO
I like Ray and I want him to get revenge on whoever killed him before and if it is possible get his old body back, BUT I hate the thought of him ending up with Jiskar, I mean everything he did to him before is just messed up, and no amount of good deeds or whatever would make it okey for them to be together (just my thoughts) (︶︿︶)＝凸
EXACTLY. My heart bleeds for them to be happy together, but my brain cannot forgive everything Jiskar put him through. If It's written this, I would have instead made it a slow burn. Have him be ADOPTED by Jiskar, then raised by the castle staff, to avoid grooming. I then would have had Jiskar realize he was the reincarnation when Ray was an adult, around the same time he started getting training be Christian and red head. This making Christian's love for him not as creepy.
I would have them live triangled that as Jiskar began to trust Ray more and more. It would have been Jiskar's attempt to replace his doomed petulant excuse for an heir.
All pilot points Schreiber, no rape and everyone is ultimately decent. It may not end happily, and I would throw in some attempted rape by baddies, but people just really don't like rooting for rapists and groomers us know?
That said, I'm absolutely insisted by Christian.
FINALLY he left ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶ you should feel even worse, now suffer (⌒▽⌒)
Your making my stomach hurt from laughing