When the system showed up in front of mc the next scene was him searching whats "Prophetic Dream" .. like he didn't even flinch or surprised that something showed up in front of him??? Or saying something like "Am I still dreaming!??" (W/ a scared and anxious expression)
Ngl the story was great... It's just that the way they drew the scenes is a bit lacking , like something missing... And just like @SaltyOmellete comment "Even the extra that was snatched from the window was expressionless" , like girl ... the artist cant even search how to draw a screaming mouth? And just add a bit of tears on the face even if they don't drew her well cause she's just an extra...
And for the mc and ml feels like artist is afraid to make them ugly? So they're avoiding to make like a big expression or just that artist haven't been making an art with a lot of different expression .... Cause I'm an artist as well (beginner and not as great as this artist) anyways I've tried making characters with different expression before and the results was not so great as I expected so in the end all my drawing was smiling and I can't make different expression...maybe the artist is the same.....
Really Hoping for their improvement in art and scene execution cause this story is really promising
Ch.10 is "what the f- happening in this world" moment ... Like girl ,... That ...I have no comment, I just can't .. my brain isn't braining at all ... Like I have so many things I wanna say but I just can't put it into words..
ITS BACKKKK!!?!? IS THIS ONLY AN EXTRA OR ANOTHER SEASON!????
side story, it literally is written bruhh
So it's Green Flag to Red Flag rather than the usual Red Flag to Green Flag ... Interesting (☉｡☉)! Let's see how the story will play out!
The ending of chapter 1 lmao
I searched this in ba.toto and it seems like 1 page is missing which is page 11 in ba.toto there's an orc carrying a girl
Sir Ashler just had enough of these crazy people xD
What tf happening?? This is more confusing than lalamanga's translation