
It really did have the potential, it felt like it would do good if it was the usual 6 chapter BL.
Ch 4: Uke and son doing their best to survive while seme tries to continue college. End it with a cliffhanger where they finally see each other
Ch 5: continue the cliffhanger, the two catch up, uke feeling somewhat hesitant to be with seme. Seme insists. They confess, they kiss.
Ch 6: steamy sex. Boom pregnant.
Ch 6.5: epilogue, they old, they die, their children happy with their family visits their grave.
Cliche but better ig

was one of the few who wanted to read more bc I wanted seme to grovel on the ground, asking for uke's forgiveness but seeing how passive uke is, I think he'll forgive seme after a short while. He's going to let seme chase him for a bit but nonetheless, he's going to give in easier than what I wanted to imagine him to. Also, I want him to not have feelings for seme when on the chasing arc, like he's done with him. Ieiwjdwiwdjd
However, there's still a chance that the redemption arc would be satisfying enough so not gonna drop this

Question:
I've read this actually a while ago and with little to 15 chaps or less. And I skipped some chaps rn and why are they more "modernized"? Like why are they in the city all of a sudden? Is the story really modern and they were just settled in the province area?

All right girl for me to tell you I’m gonna have to spoil you, so prepare yourself. I’m gonna do it right after this sentence. they’re in a modern world right now because we’re continuing and in their new life right now like this is their reincarnation because you know…..yeah but not for the black haired guy though because he’s been here through all these years because you know it’s some supernatural shit going on.

I know it was mean but, Dan really needs a reality check. That said, I do see where Dan's coming from too. Among all of Jaekyung's fuck buddies, Dan was the only one who made Jaekyung excert more effort. But that doesn't change the fact that Jaekyung only does more bc he likes sex better with Dan, not that he likes Dan himself. Baby cinnamon roll needs to notice that.
That said, I hope to see Jaekyung grovel on the ground and beg for Dan to be with him. Suffer more please. Because I can't defend him no more as chapters build up lmao. I hope the author can write Jaekyung's character well like Skylar from My starry Sky. I hope for a good build and a good background.
fuckinh date already